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     new cbac53b  Update code comments to improve readability in docs (#9024)
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commit cbac53b25ef37691b33684f6e4faf3144a308739
Author: Lukasz Cwik <lukec...@gmail.com>
AuthorDate: Tue Jul 9 13:06:30 2019 -0700

    Update code comments to improve readability in docs (#9024)
    
    * Update code comments to improve readability in docs
    
    * Apply suggestions
    
    Clarify FileIO.ReadableFile description
    
    Co-Authored-By: Lukasz Cwik <lc...@google.com>
    
    * Run spotlessApply for Spotless PreCommit check
    
    * Add javadoc class description for Java PreCommit check
    
    * Fix javadoc comment
    
    * fixup! Fix broken link
---
 .../apache/beam/examples/snippets/Snippets.java    | 39 ++++++++++------------
 website/src/documentation/patterns/overview.md     |  4 +--
 .../documentation/patterns/side-input-patterns.md  |  4 +--
 3 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

diff --git 
a/examples/java/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/examples/snippets/Snippets.java 
b/examples/java/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/examples/snippets/Snippets.java
index fb48304..2907ff3 100644
--- 
a/examples/java/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/examples/snippets/Snippets.java
+++ 
b/examples/java/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/examples/snippets/Snippets.java
@@ -528,22 +528,23 @@ public class Snippets {
         TextIO.read()
             .from("<path-to-files>/*")
             .watchForNewFiles(
-                // Check for new files every minute
+                // Check for new files every minute.
                 Duration.standardMinutes(1),
-                // Stop watching the filepattern if no new files appear within 
an hour
+                // Stop watching the file pattern if no new files appear for 
an hour.
                 
Watch.Growth.afterTimeSinceNewOutput(Duration.standardHours(1))));
     // [END FileProcessPatternProcessNewFilesSnip2]
 
     // [START FileProcessPatternAccessMetadataSnip1]
     p.apply(FileIO.match().filepattern("hdfs://path/to/*.gz"))
-        // withCompression can be omitted - by default compression is detected 
from the filename.
+        // The withCompression method is optional. By default, the Beam SDK 
detects compression from
+        // the filename.
         .apply(FileIO.readMatches().withCompression(Compression.GZIP))
         .apply(
             ParDo.of(
                 new DoFn<FileIO.ReadableFile, String>() {
                   @ProcessElement
                   public void process(@Element FileIO.ReadableFile file) {
-                    // We now have access to the file and its metadata
+                    // We can now access the file and its metadata.
                     LOG.info("File Metadata resourceId is {} ", 
file.getMetadata().resourceId());
                   }
                 }));
@@ -555,12 +556,11 @@ public class Snippets {
 
   // [START SideInputPatternSlowUpdateGlobalWindowSnip1]
   public static void sideInputPatterns() {
-    // Using View.asSingleton, this pipeline uses a dummy external service as 
illustration.
-    // Run in debug mode to see the output
+    // This pipeline uses View.asSingleton for a placeholder external service.
+    // Run in debug mode to see the output.
     Pipeline p = Pipeline.create();
 
-    // Create slowly updating sideinput
-
+    // Create a side input that updates each second.
     PCollectionView<Map<String, String>> map =
         p.apply(GenerateSequence.from(0).withRate(1, 
Duration.standardSeconds(5L)))
             .apply(
@@ -574,20 +574,15 @@ public class Snippets {
                       @ProcessElement
                       public void process(
                           @Element Long input, OutputReceiver<Map<String, 
String>> o) {
-                        // Do any external reads needed here...
-                        // We will make use of our dummy external service.
-                        // Every time this triggers, the complete map will be 
replaced with that
-                        // read from
-                        // the service.
-                        o.output(DummyExternalService.readDummyData());
+                        // Replace map with test data from the placeholder 
external service.
+                        // Add external reads here.
+                        o.output(PlaceholderExternalService.readTestData());
                       }
                     }))
             .apply(View.asSingleton());
 
-    // ---- Consume slowly updating sideinput
-
-    // GenerateSequence is only used here to generate dummy data for this 
illustration.
-    // You would use your real source for example PubSubIO, KafkaIO etc...
+    // Consume side input. GenerateSequence generates test data.
+    // Use a real source (like PubSubIO or KafkaIO) in production.
     p.apply(GenerateSequence.from(0).withRate(1, Duration.standardSeconds(1L)))
         .apply(Window.into(FixedWindows.of(Duration.standardSeconds(1))))
         .apply(Sum.longsGlobally().withoutDefaults())
@@ -601,7 +596,7 @@ public class Snippets {
                         c.outputWithTimestamp(KV.of(1L, c.element()), 
Instant.now());
 
                         LOG.debug(
-                            "Value is {} key A is {} and key B is {}",
+                            "Value is {}, key A is {}, and key B is {}.",
                             c.element(),
                             keyMap.get("Key_A"),
                             keyMap.get("Key_B"));
@@ -610,10 +605,10 @@ public class Snippets {
                 .withSideInputs(map));
   }
 
-  /** Dummy class representing a pretend external service. */
-  public static class DummyExternalService {
+  /** Placeholder class that represents an external service generating test 
data. */
+  public static class PlaceholderExternalService {
 
-    public static Map<String, String> readDummyData() {
+    public static Map<String, String> readTestData() {
 
       Map<String, String> map = new HashMap<>();
       Instant now = Instant.now();
diff --git a/website/src/documentation/patterns/overview.md 
b/website/src/documentation/patterns/overview.md
index c2d8324..d676b2e 100644
--- a/website/src/documentation/patterns/overview.md
+++ b/website/src/documentation/patterns/overview.md
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ Pipeline patterns demonstrate common Beam use cases. Pipeline 
patterns are based
 * [Accessing filenames]({{ site.baseurl 
}}/documentation/patterns/file-processing-patterns/#accessing-filenames)
 
 **Side input patterns** - Patterns for processing supplementary data
-* [Using global window side inputs in non-global windows]({{ site.baseurl 
}}/documentation/patterns/side-input-patterns/#using-global-window-side-inputs-in-non-global-windows)
+* [Slowly updating global window side inputs]({{ site.baseurl 
}}/documentation/patterns/side-input-patterns/#slowly-updating-global-window-side-inputs)
 
 **Pipeline option patterns** - Patterns for configuring pipelines
 * [Retroactively logging runtime parameters]({{ site.baseurl 
}}/documentation/patterns/pipeline-option-patterns/#retroactively-logging-runtime-parameters)
@@ -42,4 +42,4 @@ To contribute a new pipeline pattern, create an issue with 
the [`pipeline-patter
 ## What's next
 
 * Try an [end-to-end example]({{ site.baseurl }}/get-started/try-apache-beam/)
-* Execute your pipeline on a [runner]({{ site.baseurl 
}}/documentation/runners/capability-matrix/)
\ No newline at end of file
+* Execute your pipeline on a [runner]({{ site.baseurl 
}}/documentation/runners/capability-matrix/)
diff --git a/website/src/documentation/patterns/side-input-patterns.md 
b/website/src/documentation/patterns/side-input-patterns.md
index c5458ca..dc58fd1 100644
--- a/website/src/documentation/patterns/side-input-patterns.md
+++ b/website/src/documentation/patterns/side-input-patterns.md
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@ limitations under the License.
 
 The samples on this page show you common Beam side input patterns. A side 
input is an additional input that your `DoFn` can access each time it processes 
an element in the input `PCollection`. For more information, see the 
[programming guide section on side inputs]({{ site.baseurl 
}}/documentation/programming-guide/#side-inputs).
 
-## Using global window side inputs in non-global windows
+## Slowly updating global window side inputs
 
 You can retrieve side inputs from global windows to use them in a pipeline job 
with non-global windows, like a `FixedWindow`.
 
-To use global window side inputs in pipelines with non-global windows:
+To slowly update global window side inputs in pipelines with non-global 
windows:
 
 1. Write a `DoFn` that periodically pulls data from a bounded source into a 
global window.
     

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