Improvements to Verification page.

Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/commit/b01daa59
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/tree/b01daa59
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/diff/b01daa59

Branch: refs/heads/0.5.0
Commit: b01daa595697f62c830981dda2ae7df0252baafd
Parents: 781c95b
Author: David Toy <[email protected]>
Authored: Mon Apr 22 12:22:40 2013 +0100
Committer: David Toy <[email protected]>
Committed: Mon Apr 22 12:22:40 2013 +0100

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 docs/meta/verify.md | 55 +++++++++++++++++++-----------------------------
 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/brooklyn-docs/blob/b01daa59/docs/meta/verify.md
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diff --git a/docs/meta/verify.md b/docs/meta/verify.md
index faa97f5..5965946 100644
--- a/docs/meta/verify.md
+++ b/docs/meta/verify.md
@@ -1,47 +1,36 @@
 ---
 layout: page
-title: Verify the integrity of the files
+title: Verify the Integrity of Downloads
 toc: /toc.json
 ---
 {% include fields.md %}
 
-It is essential that you verify the integrity of the downloaded files using 
the PGP signatures or SHA-1 checksums.
+It is essential for security that you verify the integrity of the downloaded 
files using their PGP signatures or SHA-1 checksums.
 
-The PGP signatures can be verified using PGP or GPG. First download the 
[brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc](brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc)
-file as well as the `.asc` PGP signature file for the relevant artefact. Make 
sure you get these files from the main
-{% if SNAPSHOT %}
-[Maven Central]({{ mavencentral_repo_groupid_url }})
-{% else %}
-[Sonatype]({{ sonatype_repo_groupid_url }})
-{% endif %}
-repository rather than from a mirror. Then verify the signatures using one of 
the following commands:
+### Verifying PGP signatures using PGP or GPG
 
-```
-% pgpk -a brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc
-% pgpv brooklyn-{{ site.brooklyn-version }}-dist.tar.gz.asc
-```
+Download the [brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc](brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc)
+file and the `.asc` PGP signature file for the relevant artefact.
+
+(Make sure you get these files from the main {% if SNAPSHOT %}[Maven 
Central]({{ mavencentral_repo_groupid_url }}){% else %}[Sonatype]({{ 
sonatype_repo_groupid_url }}){% endif %} repository rather than from a mirror.)
+
+Verify the signatures using one of the following commands:
+
+       pgpk -a brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc
+       pgpv brooklyn-{{ site.brooklyn-version }}-dist.tar.gz.asc
 
 or
 
-```
-% pgp -ka brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc
-% pgp brooklyn-{{ site.brooklyn-version }}-dist.zip.asc
-```
+       pgp -ka brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc
+       pgp brooklyn-{{ site.brooklyn-version }}-dist.zip.asc
 
 or
 
-```
-% gpg --import brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc
-% gpg --verify brooklyn-{{ site.brooklyn-version }}-dist.tar.gz.asc
-```
-
-You can also verify the SHA-1 checksum of the files. A program called `sha1` 
or `sha1sum` is included in
-most Linux distributions and OSX. For Windows users, `fsum` supports SHA-1. 
Ensure your generated checksum
-string matches the contents of the `.sha1` file for the relevant artefact, 
again making sure you get this
-file from the main
-{% if SNAPSHOT %}
-[Maven Central]({{ mavencentral_repo_groupid_url }})
-{% else %}
-[Sonatype]({{ sonatype_repo_groupid_url }})
-{% endif %}
-repository, rather than from a mirror.
+       gpg --import brooklyn-gpg-public-key.asc        
+       gpg --verify brooklyn-{{ site.brooklyn-version }}-dist.tar.gz.asc
+
+You can also verify the SHA-1 checksum of the files.
+
+A program called `sha1` or `sha1sum` is included in most Linux distributions 
and OSx. For Windows users, `fsum` supports SHA-1. 
+
+Ensure the generated checksum string matches the contents of the `.sha1` file 
for the relevant artefact (and again download from {% if SNAPSHOT %}[Maven 
Central]({{ mavencentral_repo_groupid_url }}){% else %}[Sonatype]({{ 
sonatype_repo_groupid_url }}){% endif %} repository, rather than from a mirror).

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