Sandeep Tamhankar created CASSANDRA-10850:
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             Summary: v4 spec has tons of grammatical mistakes
                 Key: CASSANDRA-10850
                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CASSANDRA-10850
             Project: Cassandra
          Issue Type: Bug
          Components: Documentation and Website
            Reporter: Sandeep Tamhankar


https://github.com/apache/cassandra/blob/cassandra-3.0/doc/native_protocol_v4.spec

I notice the following in the first section of the spec and then gave up:

"The list of allowed opcode is defined Section 2.3" => "The list of allowed 
opcode*s* is defined in Section 2.3"
"the details of each corresponding message is described Section 4" => "the 
details of each corresponding message are described in Section 4" since the 
subject is details, not message.
"Requests are those frame sent by" => "Requests are those frame*s* sent by"

I think someone should go through the whole spec and fix all the mistakes 
rather than me pointing out the ones I notice piece-meal. I found the grammar 
errors to be rather distracting.



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