ektravel commented on code in PR #14529:
URL: https://github.com/apache/druid/pull/14529#discussion_r1254798943


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docs/development/extensions-core/kinesis-ingestion.md:
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@@ -23,20 +23,15 @@ sidebar_label: "Amazon Kinesis"
   ~ under the License.
   -->
 
-When you enable the Kinesis indexing service, you can configure *supervisors* 
on the Overlord to manage the creation and lifetime of Kinesis indexing tasks. 
These indexing tasks read events using Kinesis' own shard and sequence number 
mechanism to guarantee exactly-once ingestion. The supervisor oversees the 
state of the indexing tasks to:
+When you enable the Kinesis indexing service, you can configure supervisors on 
the Overlord to manage the creation and lifetime of Kinesis indexing tasks. 
These indexing tasks read events using Kinesis' own shard and sequence number 
mechanism to guarantee exactly-once ingestion. The supervisor oversees the 
state of the indexing tasks to coordinate handoffs, manage failures, and ensure 
that scalability and replication requirements are maintained.
 
-- coordinate handoffs
-- manage failures
-- ensure that scalability and replication requirements are maintained.
-
-To use the Kinesis indexing service, load the `druid-kinesis-indexing-service` 
core Apache Druid extension (see
-[Including Extensions](../../configuration/extensions.md#loading-extensions)).
+To use the Kinesis indexing service, load the `druid-kinesis-indexing-service` 
core Apache Druid extension. See [Loading 
extensions](../../configuration/extensions.md#loading-extensions) for more 
information.
 
 > Before you deploy the Kinesis extension to production, read the [Kinesis 
 > known issues](#kinesis-known-issues).
 
-## Submitting a Supervisor Spec
+## Submitting a supervisor spec

Review Comment:
   100% agree! I will save it for a different PR.



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