Improved grammar and accuracy of content


Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/fineract-site/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/fineract-site/commit/bb234738
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/fineract-site/tree/bb234738
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/fineract-site/diff/bb234738

Branch: refs/heads/asf-site
Commit: bb23473859df3d72b6cd78578ab5c5245721d4c7
Parents: 6248cee
Author: Myrle Krantz <my...@apache.org>
Authored: Fri Jul 6 11:09:26 2018 +0200
Committer: Myrle Krantz <my...@apache.org>
Committed: Fri Jul 6 11:09:26 2018 +0200

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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/fineract-site/blob/bb234738/index.html
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diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 76b1027..691f974 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -66,12 +66,12 @@
       <p class="flow-text justify-align">
         Fineract provides a reliable, robust, and affordable solution
         for entrepreneurs, financial institutions, and service providers
-        to offer financial services broadly and especially to the world’s 3 
billion underbanked and unbanked.
-        Fineract is aimed at innovative, mobile and cloud based solutions,
+        to offer financial services to the world’s 2 billion underbanked and 
unbanked.
+        Fineract is aimed at innovative mobile and cloud-based solutions,
         and enables digital transaction accounts for all.
       </p>
-       <p class="flow-text justify-align">Fineract 1.x is a cloud hosted 
platform with open APIs,
-    while Fineract-CN (generation 3) is a cloud native, microservices 
architecture
+       <p class="flow-text justify-align">Fineract 1.x is a mature platform 
with open APIs,
+    while Fineract CN is a cloud native, microservice architecture
     also supporting open banking APIs.
       </p>
       <div class="divider"></div>
@@ -80,13 +80,13 @@
       <h3 class="center-align">About</h3>
       <p class="flow-text justify-align">
         Apache Fineract can be deployed in any environment:
-        cloud or on-premise, and front end interfaces on or offline, mobile or 
PC;
-        it’s extensible enough to support any organizational type or 
delivery channel,
+        cloud or on-premise.  It can support front end interfaces on or 
offline, mobile or PC.
+        It’s extensible enough to support any organizational type or 
delivery channel,
         and flexible enough to support any product, service, or lending 
methodology.
         For any organization, big or small, it provides
         the client data management, loan and savings portfolio management, 
integrated real time accounting,
         and social and financial reporting needed
-        to bring digital financial services in a modern connected world.
+        to bring digital financial services to a modern connected world.
       </p>
          <p class="flow-text justify-align">
       Fineract 1.x compares well to other core banking systems
@@ -98,22 +98,24 @@
       payment transactions,
       and portfolio management.
       It includes an open API that dates to 2011 and is deployed in relatively 
high transaction
-      volume environments.  </p>
+      volume environments.
+    </p>
                <p class="flow-text justify-align">
-      Fineract-CN operates on the principle that financial services are an 
innovative space
+      Fineract CN operates on the principle that financial services are an 
innovative space
       and so each fineract microservice encapsulates a domain that can be 
combined
       with other microservices to create new platform offerings.
-      Fineract-CN microservices can be combined to create new software 
platforms for
+      Fineract CN microservices can be combined to create new software 
platforms for
       digital financial service providers.
-       </p>
+      Fineract CN is still in its early days, but preliminary tests have shown 
that a
+      simple single-instance laptop deployment of Fineract CN can process over
+      1000 transactions/second.
+      Fineract CN also includes a fully Apache-licensed backoffice UI.
+         </p>
          <p class="flow-text justify-align">
-      Fineract code was originally developed by contributors to Mifos.org,
-      a US Based Charity with a mission for financial inclusion globally.
-      It was brought over to Apache in 2016 and is used by
+      Fineract 1.x began incubation at Apache in December 2015 and is used by
       an active community of companies
       who build solutions for both financial inclusion and fintech innovation.
-               
-      </p>
+    </p>
 
       <div class="divider"></div>
     </section>
@@ -122,7 +124,7 @@
       <p class="flow-text justify-align">
         The Apache Fineract community welcomes contributors who want to 
support the
         Fineract technology. Our community builds everything from this website,
-        from the Fineract code to documentation and best practices information.
+        to the Fineract code to documentation and best practices information.
       </p>
       <p class="flow-text justify-align">
         We especially welcome additions and corrections to the

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