Repository: ignite
Updated Branches:
  refs/heads/master 00a330a7d -> a44c54caa


IGNITE-8537 Web Console: Proof-reading texts.


Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/ignite/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/ignite/commit/a44c54ca
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Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/ignite/diff/a44c54ca

Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: a44c54caa2941661e4e42051b3b1a64345a23338
Parents: 00a330a
Author: Alexey Kuznetsov <akuznet...@apache.org>
Authored: Tue May 22 15:47:57 2018 +0700
Committer: Alexey Kuznetsov <akuznet...@apache.org>
Committed: Tue May 22 15:47:57 2018 +0700

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 .../page-forgot-password/template.pug           |  2 +-
 .../app/components/page-landing/template.pug    | 20 ++++++++++----------
 .../helpers/jade/form/form-field-feedback.pug   |  2 +-
 .../helpers/jade/form/form-field-password.pug   |  2 +-
 .../app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-text.pug   |  2 +-
 5 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/ignite/blob/a44c54ca/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-forgot-password/template.pug
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diff --git 
a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-forgot-password/template.pug 
b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-forgot-password/template.pug
index 2532959..58a8f7e 100644
--- 
a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-forgot-password/template.pug
+++ 
b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-forgot-password/template.pug
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ web-console-header
     section
         - const form = '$ctrl.form'
         h3 Forgot password?
-        p That's ok! Simply enter your email below and a reset password link 
will be sent to you via email. You can then follow that link and select a new 
password.
+        p Enter the email address for your account & we'll email you a link to 
reset your password.
         form(name=form novalidate ng-submit='$ctrl.remindPassword()')
             +form-field__email({
                 label: 'Email:',

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/ignite/blob/a44c54ca/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-landing/template.pug
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diff --git 
a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-landing/template.pug 
b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-landing/template.pug
index 7b5b1cc..0fc1f9c 100644
--- a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-landing/template.pug
+++ b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/components/page-landing/template.pug
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ section.intro-container-wrapper
         .col-lg-6.col-md-6.col-sm-6.col-xs-12.intro-content
             h1  Web Console
             h2 An Interactive Configuration Wizard and Management Tool for 
Apache™ Ignite®
-            p It provides an interactive configuration wizard which helps you 
create and download configuration files and code snippets for your Apache 
Ignite projects. Additionally, the tool allows you to automatically load SQL 
metadata from any RDBMS, run SQL queries on your in-memory cache as well as 
view execution plans, in-memory schema, and streaming charts.
+            p It provides an interactive configuration wizard which helps you 
create and download configuration files and code snippets for your Apache 
Ignite projects. Additionally, the tool allows you to automatically load SQL 
metadata from any RDBMS, run SQL queries on your in-memory cache, and view 
execution plans, in-memory schema, and streaming charts.
             a#signup_show.btn.btn-lg.btn-primary.btn-custom(ui-sref='signup') 
Sign Up
         .col-lg-6.col-md-6.col-sm-6.col-xs-12
             ui-carousel(slides='$ctrl.images' autoplay='true' 
slides-to-show='1' arrows='false')
@@ -33,33 +33,33 @@ section.intro-container-wrapper
                     img(ng-src='{{item}}')
 section.features-container-wrapper
     .container.features-container
-        .section-title  Web Console allows you to:
+        .section-title The Web Console allows you to:
         .row
             .col-lg-6.col-md-6.col-sm-6.col-xs-12.feature
                 .col-lg-2.col-md-2.col-sm-2.col-xs-2
                     i.fa.fa-sitemap
                 .col-lg-9.col-md-9.col-sm-9.col-xs-9
-                    h3 Configure Apache Ignite Clusters and Caches
-                    p The Web Console configuration wizard takes you through a 
step-by-step process to define all of your required configuration parameters. 
The system then generates a ready-to-use project with all of the required 
config files for you.
+                    h3 Configure Apache Ignite clusters and caches
+                    p The Web Console configuration wizard takes you through a 
step-by-step process that helps you define all the required configuration 
parameters. The system then generates a ready-to-use project with all the 
required config files.
             .col-lg-6.col-md-6.col-sm-6.col-xs-12.feature
                 .col-lg-2.col-md-2.col-sm-2.col-xs-2
                     i.fa.fa-search
                 .col-lg-9.col-md-9.col-sm-9.col-xs-9
-                    h3 Run Free Form SQL Queries on #[br] Apache Ignite Caches
-                    p By connecting The Web Console to your Apache Ignite 
cluster, you can execute SQL queries on your in-memory cache. You can also view 
the execution plan, in-memory schema, and streaming charts for your cluster.
+                    h3 Run free-form SQL queries on #[br] Apache Ignite caches
+                    p By connecting the Web Console to your Apache Ignite 
cluster, you can execute SQL queries on your in-memory cache. You can also view 
the execution plan, in-memory schema, and streaming charts for your cluster.
         .row
             .col-lg-6.col-md-6.col-sm-6.col-xs-12.feature
                 .col-lg-2.col-md-2.col-sm-2.col-xs-2
                     i.fa.fa-database
                 .col-lg-9.col-md-9.col-sm-9.col-xs-9
-                    h3 Import Database Schemas from #[br] Virtually Any RDBMS
-                    p To speed the creation of your configuration files, The 
Web Console allows you to automatically import the database schema from any 
current RDBMS.  and Apache Ignite support virtually any RDBMS including Oracle, 
SAP, MySQL, PostgreSQL and many more.
+                    h3 Import database schemas from #[br] virtually any RDBMS
+                    p To speed the creation of your configuration files, the 
Web Console allows you to automatically import the database schema from 
virtually any RDBMS including Oracle, SAP, MySQL, PostgreSQL, and many more.
             .col-lg-6.col-md-6.col-sm-6.col-xs-12.feature
                 .col-lg-2.col-md-2.col-sm-2.col-xs-2
                     i.fa.fa-gears
                 .col-lg-9.col-md-9.col-sm-9.col-xs-9
-                    h3 Manage The Web Console users
-                    p With The Web Console you can have accounts with 
different roles.
+                    h3 Manage the Web Console users
+                    p The Web Console allows you to have accounts with 
different roles.
         .align-center.text-center
             a.btn.btn-lg.btn-primary.btn-custom(ui-sref='signup') Get Started
 

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/ignite/blob/a44c54ca/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-feedback.pug
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diff --git 
a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-feedback.pug 
b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-feedback.pug
index 2fa0a3c..dcdcf0e 100644
--- a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-feedback.pug
+++ b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-feedback.pug
@@ -15,4 +15,4 @@
     limitations under the License.
 
 mixin form-field-feedback(name, error, message)
-    div(ng-message=error) #{message}
\ No newline at end of file
+    div(ng-message=error) #{message}

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/ignite/blob/a44c54ca/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-password.pug
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diff --git 
a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-password.pug 
b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-password.pug
index 6de29c8..3e35974 100644
--- a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-password.pug
+++ b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-password.pug
@@ -44,4 +44,4 @@ mixin ignite-form-field-password(label, model, name, 
disabled, required, placeho
             if block
                 block
 
-            +form-field-feedback(name, 'required', `${errLbl} could not be 
empty!`)
\ No newline at end of file
+            +form-field-feedback(name, 'required', `${errLbl} could not be 
empty!`)

http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/ignite/blob/a44c54ca/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-text.pug
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diff --git 
a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-text.pug 
b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-text.pug
index d1c6491..3d28e17 100644
--- a/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-text.pug
+++ b/modules/web-console/frontend/app/helpers/jade/form/form-field-text.pug
@@ -50,4 +50,4 @@ mixin ignite-form-field-text(lbl, model, name, disabled, 
required, placeholder,
 mixin sane-ignite-form-field-text({label, model, name, disabled, required, 
placeholder, tip})
     +ignite-form-field-text(label, model, name, disabled, required, 
placeholder, tip)&attributes(attributes)
         if block
-            block
\ No newline at end of file
+            block

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