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commit ceaa253b0740880cf27e2a3e4a5f18de8df8e18f
Author: Jennifer Huang <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Fri Apr 26 11:15:21 2019 +0800

    [Doc] Update the site2/docs/getting-started-docker.md file (#4121)
    
    ### Motivation
    Refine the command and some typos when reading the document.
    
    ### Modifications
    1. In `Starting Pulsar inside Docker` section, refine the command from 
`{{site.current_version}}` to `{{pulsar:version}}`.
    2. Refine some sentences to be a little more smooth.
---
 site2/docs/getting-started-docker.md | 47 +++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)

diff --git a/site2/docs/getting-started-docker.md 
b/site2/docs/getting-started-docker.md
index f343dd9..1fafd7d 100644
--- a/site2/docs/getting-started-docker.md
+++ b/site2/docs/getting-started-docker.md
@@ -4,41 +4,40 @@ title: Start a standalone cluster with Docker
 sidebar_label: Pulsar in Docker
 ---
 
-For the purposes of local development and testing, you can run Pulsar in 
standalone
+For local development and testing, you can run Pulsar in standalone
 mode on your own machine within a Docker container.
 
-If you don't have Docker installed, you can download the [Community 
edition](https://www.docker.com/community-edition)
+If you have not installed Docker, download the [Community 
edition](https://www.docker.com/community-edition)
 and follow the instructions for your OS.
 
-## Starting Pulsar inside Docker
+## Start Pulsar inside Docker
 
 ```shell
 $ docker run -it \
   -p 6650:6650 \
   -p 8080:8080 \
   -v $PWD/data:/pulsar/data \
-  apachepulsar/pulsar:{{site.current_version}} \
+  apachepulsar/pulsar:{{pulsar:version}} \
   bin/pulsar standalone
 ```
 
-Under Windows, you should use something like the following docker command:
+For Windows, enter something like the following docker command:
 
 ```shell
 $ docker run -it \
   -p 6650:6650 \
   -p 8080:8080 \
   -v "$PWD/data:/pulsar/data".ToLower() \
-  apachepulsar/pulsar:{{site.current_version}} \
+  apachepulsar/pulsar:{{pulsar:version}} \
   bin/pulsar standalone
 ```
 
 A few things to note about this command:
- * `$PWD/data` : The docker host directory under the Windows operating system 
must be lowercase.`$PWD/data` can provide you with the specified directory, for 
example: `E:/data`.
- * `-v $PWD/data:/pulsar/data`: This will make the process inside the 
container to store the
-   data and metadata in the filesystem outside the container, in order to not 
start "fresh" every
-   time the container is restarted.
+ * `$PWD/data` : The docker host directory in Windows operating system must be 
lowercase.`$PWD/data` provides you with the specified directory, for example: 
`E:/data`.
+ * `-v $PWD/data:/pulsar/data`: This makes the process inside the container to 
store the
+   data and metadata in the filesystem outside the container, in order not to 
start "fresh" every time the container is restarted.
 
-If Pulsar has been successfully started, you should see `INFO`-level log 
messages like this:
+If you start Pulsar successfully, you will see `INFO`-level log messages like 
this:
 
 ```
 2017-08-09 22:34:04,030 - INFO  - [main:WebService@213] - Web Service started 
at http://127.0.0.1:8080
@@ -46,32 +45,31 @@ If Pulsar has been successfully started, you should see 
`INFO`-level log message
 ...
 ```
 
-
 > #### Automatically created namespace
-> When you start a local standalone cluster, Pulsar will automatically create 
a `public/default`
-namespace that you can use for development purposes. All Pulsar topics are 
managed within namespaces.
-For more info, see [Topics](concepts-messaging.md#topics).
+> When you start a local standalone cluster, a `public/default`
+namespace is created automatically. The namespace is used for development 
purposes. All Pulsar topics are managed within namespaces.
+For more information, see [Topics](concepts-messaging.md#topics).
 
 
 ## Start publishing and consuming messages
 
-Pulsar currently offers client libraries for [Java](client-libraries-java.md), 
[Go](client-libraries-go.md), [Python](client-libraries-python.md) 
+Pulsar offers client libraries for [Java](client-libraries-java.md), 
[Go](client-libraries-go.md), [Python](client-libraries-python.md) 
 and [C++](client-libraries-cpp.md). If you're running a local standalone 
cluster, you can
-use one of these root URLs for interacting with your cluster:
+use one of these root URLs to interact with your cluster:
 
 * `pulsar://localhost:6650`
 * `http://localhost:8080`
 
-Here's an example that lets you quickly get started with Pulsar by using the 
[Python](client-libraries-python.md)
+The following example will guide you get started with Pulsar quickly by using 
the [Python](client-libraries-python.md)
 client API.
 
-You can install the Pulsar Python client library directly from 
[PyPI](https://pypi.org/project/pulsar-client/):
+Install the Pulsar Python client library directly from 
[PyPI](https://pypi.org/project/pulsar-client/):
 
 ```shell
 $ pip install pulsar-client
 ```
 
-First create a consumer and subscribe to the topic:
+Create a consumer and subscribe to the topic:
 
 ```python
 import pulsar
@@ -88,7 +86,7 @@ while True:
 client.close()
 ```
 
-Now we can start a producer to send some test messages:
+Now start a producer to send some test messages:
 
 ```python
 import pulsar
@@ -102,11 +100,10 @@ for i in range(10):
 client.close()
 ```
 
-
 ## Get the topic statistics
 
-In Pulsar you can use REST, Java, or command-line tools to control every 
aspect of the system.
-You can find detailed documentation of all the APIs in the [Admin API 
Overview](admin-api-overview.md).
+In Pulsar, you can use REST, Java, or command-line tools to control every 
aspect of the system.
+For details on APIs, refer to [Admin API Overview](admin-api-overview.md).
 
 In the simplest example, you can use curl to probe the stats for a particular 
topic:
 
@@ -114,7 +111,7 @@ In the simplest example, you can use curl to probe the 
stats for a particular to
 $ curl http://localhost:8080/admin/v2/persistent/public/default/my-topic/stats 
| python -m json.tool
 ```
 
-The output will be something like this:
+The output is something like this:
 
 ```json
 {

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