momo-jun commented on code in PR #18343:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/18343#discussion_r1021117663


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site2/docs/security-athenz.md:
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@@ -36,20 +36,13 @@ Note that you can specify any action and resource in step 2 
since they are not u
 
 For more specific steps involving the Athenz UI, refer to [Example Service 
Access Control 
Setup](https://github.com/AthenZ/athenz/blob/master/docs/example_service_athenz_setup.md#server-provider-domain).
 
-## Enable Athenz authentication on brokers
+## Enable Athenz authentication on brokers/proxies
 
-:::note
-
-When you are using Athenz as an authentication provider, it's highly 
recommended to use [TLS encryption](security-tls-transport.md) as it can 
protect role tokens from being intercepted and reused. For more details 
involving TLS encryption, see [Architecture - Data 
Model](https://github.com/AthenZ/athenz/blob/master/docs/data_model).
-
-:::
-
-In the `conf/broker.conf` configuration file in your Pulsar installation, you 
need to provide the class name of the Athenz authentication provider as well as 
a comma-separated list of provider domain names.
+To configure brokers/proxies to authenticate clients using Authenz, add the 
following parameters to the `conf/broker.conf` and the `conf/proxy.conf` file. 
If you use a standalone Pulsar, you need to add these parameters to the 
`conf/standalone.conf` file, you need to provide the class name of the Athenz 
authentication provider as well as a comma-separated list of provider domain 
names.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   To configure brokers/proxies to authenticate clients using Authenz, add the 
following parameters to the `conf/broker.conf` and the `conf/proxy.conf` file 
and provide the class name of the Athenz authentication provider as well as a 
comma-separated list of provider domain names. If you use a standalone Pulsar, 
you need to add these parameters to the `conf/standalone.conf` file.
   ```



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