Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5069: [doc] Improve 
Pulsar Security Kerberos
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5069#discussion_r319383635
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/security-kerberos.md
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 @@ -346,14 +342,14 @@ superUserRoles=client/{clientIp}@EXAMPLE.COM
 
 ## Regarding authentication between ZooKeeper and Broker
 
-Pulsar Broker acts as a Kerberos client when authenticating with Zookeeper. 
According to [ZooKeeper 
document](https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/ZOOKEEPER/Client-Server+mutual+authentication),
 you need these settings in `conf/zookeeper.conf`:
+Pulsar Broker acts as a Kerberos client when you are authenticating with 
Zookeeper. According to [ZooKeeper 
document](https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/ZOOKEEPER/Client-Server+mutual+authentication),
 you need these settings in `conf/zookeeper.conf`:
 
 ```
 authProvider.1=org.apache.zookeeper.server.auth.SASLAuthenticationProvider
 requireClientAuthScheme=sasl
 ```
 
-And add a section of `Client` configurations in the file `pulsar_jaas.conf`, 
which is used by Pulsar Broker:
+And enter the following commands to add a section of `Client` configurations 
in the file `pulsar_jaas.conf`, which Pulsar Broker uses:
 
 Review comment:
   Delete "And" at the beginning.

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