Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5070: [doc] Improve Pulsar security authorization URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5070#discussion_r319457023
########## File path: site2/docs/security-authorization.md ########## @@ -51,31 +49,31 @@ proxyRoles=my-proxy-role superUserRoles=my-super-user-1,my-super-user-2,my-proxy-role ``` -## Administering Tenants +## Administer Tenants -### Creating a new tenant +### Create a new tenant -A Pulsar [tenant](reference-terminology.md#tenant) is typically provisioned by Pulsar [instance](reference-terminology.md#instance) administrators or by some kind of self-service portal. +Pulsar [instance](reference-terminology.md#instance) administrators or some kind of self-service portal typically provisions a Pulsar [tenant](reference-terminology.md#tenant). -Tenants are managed using the [`pulsar-admin`](reference-pulsar-admin.md) tool. Here's an example tenant creation command: +You can manage tenants using the [`pulsar-admin`](reference-pulsar-admin.md) tool. Here's an example tenant creation command: Review comment: Avoid to use "Here's ..." in technical writing. ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org With regards, Apache Git Services
