Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5091: [doc] Improve 
Pulsar Security Encryption
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5091#discussion_r321192302
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/security-encryption.md
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 @@ -4,19 +4,19 @@ title: Pulsar Encryption
 sidebar_label: End-to-End Encryption
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-Pulsar encryption allows applications to encrypt messages at the producer and 
decrypt at the consumer. Encryption is performed using the public/private key 
pair configured by the application. Encrypted messages can only be decrypted by 
consumers with a valid key.
+Pulsar encryption allows applications to encrypt messages at the producer side 
and decrypt messages at the consumer side. You can use the public and private 
key pair that the application configures to perform encryption. Only the 
consumers with a valid key can decrypt the encrypted messages.
 
 Review comment:
   do not use "allow".
   Check styles in IBM style guides.

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