Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #11406:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/11406#discussion_r673726397



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File path: site2/docs/helm-overview.md
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@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ It includes support for:
 
 To get up and run with these charts as fast as possible, in a 
**non-production** use case, we provide a [quick start 
guide](getting-started-helm.md) for Proof of Concept (PoC) deployments.
 
-This guide walks the user through deploying these charts with default values 
and features, but *does not* meet production ready requirements. To deploy 
these charts into production under sustained load, follow the complete 
[Installation Guide](helm-install.md).
+This guide walks the user through deploying these charts with default values 
and features, but does not meet production ready requirements. To deploy these 
charts into production under sustained load, follow the complete [Installation 
Guide](helm-install.md).

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   This guide walks you through deploying these charts with default values and 
features; the default settings do not meet the production ready requirements. 
To deploy these charts into production under sustained load, follow the 
[installation guide](helm-install.md).
   ```

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File path: site2/docs/helm-overview.md
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@@ -90,10 +90,10 @@ helm delete <pulsar-release-name>
 ```
 
 For the purposes of continuity, these charts have some Kubernetes objects that 
cannot be removed when performing `helm delete`.
-It is recommended to *conciously* remove these items, as they affect 
re-deployment.
+It is recommended to  remove these items, as they affect re-deployment.

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   It is recommended to remove these items, as they affect re-deployment.
   ```

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File path: site2/docs/helm-overview.md
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@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ It includes support for:
 
 To get up and run with these charts as fast as possible, in a 
**non-production** use case, we provide a [quick start 
guide](getting-started-helm.md) for Proof of Concept (PoC) deployments.
 
-This guide walks the user through deploying these charts with default values 
and features, but *does not* meet production ready requirements. To deploy 
these charts into production under sustained load, follow the complete 
[Installation Guide](helm-install.md).
+This guide walks the user through deploying these charts with default values 
and features, but does not meet production ready requirements. To deploy these 
charts into production under sustained load, follow the complete [Installation 
Guide](helm-install.md).

Review comment:
       Try to use second person, for details, see 
https://developers.google.com/style/person




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