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commit 0f446b9cb2dd6210a3df78ef06a6d4bce82b2079
Author: Andrew Wetmore <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Mon Oct 21 17:49:16 2024 -0300

    Update README.md minor text edits (#108)
    
    Tightened the text generally. There are a lot of unneeded instances of 
'just', and of 'In order to' when 'To' is sufficient.
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 content/Apache/ComDev/WorkingGroups/README.md | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/Apache/ComDev/WorkingGroups/README.md 
b/content/Apache/ComDev/WorkingGroups/README.md
index 68c35bf..e092c24 100644
--- a/content/Apache/ComDev/WorkingGroups/README.md
+++ b/content/Apache/ComDev/WorkingGroups/README.md
@@ -20,12 +20,12 @@
 # Presentation with Reveal.JS and AsciiDoctor
 
 Remarks:
-- Currently it seems as if the system can't detect the 'docinfo' files, so we 
have to replace the `document.html.slim` file from `asciidoctor-reveal.js` with 
an updated one, that adds some additional js and css references. This template 
is located in `libs/docinfo-hack`.
-- In order to use the preview of the IntelliJ asciidoctor plugin, you need to 
set an attribute in the plugin settings: `imagesdir` = `../resources/images`
-- Even if it is possible to run the presentation directly from the 
`generated-slides` directory, some JavaScript extensions don't work in this 
case. Therefore it is required to run the presentation from a local webserver. 
-- In order to generate the diagrams, GraphVIS needs to be installed locally. 
Get it from: http://www.graphviz.org/
+- Currently it seems as if the system can't detect the 'docinfo' files, so we 
have to replace the `document.html.slim` file from `asciidoctor-reveal.js` with 
an updated one that adds some additional js and css references. This template 
is located in `libs/docinfo-hack`.
+- To use the preview of the IntelliJ asciidoctor plugin, you need to set an 
attribute in the plugin settings: `imagesdir` = `../resources/images`.
+- Even if it is possible to run the presentation directly from the 
`generated-slides` directory, some JavaScript extensions don't work in this 
case. Therefore you need to run the presentation from a local webserver. 
+- To generate the diagrams, GraphVIS needs to be installed locally. Get it 
from: http://www.graphviz.org/
 - The template is adjusted to use the codecentric font `Panton`, so be sure to 
have that installed on your presentation machine.
-- Any css adjustments can go to `src/main/theme/cc.css` as this is 
automatically embedded into the themes directory.
+- Any css adjustments can go into `src/main/theme/cc.css` as this is 
automatically embedded into the `themes` directory.
 
 ## Building the presentation
 
@@ -35,25 +35,25 @@ By running the following command, you can generate the 
presentation:
    
 ## Running the presentation
 
-In order to start a local web server serving the presentation, execute the 
following command:
+To start a local web server serving the presentation, execute the following 
command:
 
     mvn jetty:run-war
     
-As soon as that's done, just point your browser to:
+As soon as that's done, point your browser to:
 
     http://localhost:8080/
 
-Or you can just open target/generated-slides/index.html in your browser.
+Or you can open `target/generated-slides/index.html` in your browser.
 
 ## Generating PDF versions
 
-In order to generate a PDF version of the presentation just add `?print-pdf` 
to the url. (Keep in mind, that you have to add it before any `#blahblah`)
+To generate a PDF version of the presentation, add `?print-pdf` to the url. 
(Keep in mind that you have to add it before any `#blahblah`.)
 
 The following link should do the trick:
 
     http://localhost:8080/?print-pdf
     
-As soon as that's loaded, just use the normal `print` functionality of the 
browser and `print as PDF`.
+As soon as that's loaded, use the normal `print` functionality of the browser 
and `print as PDF`.
 
 ## Installing third party software:
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ As soon as that's loaded, just use the normal `print` 
functionality of the brows
 
     npm install mermaid.cli
     
-This will install mermaid under `node_modules/.bin/mmdc`.
+This installs mermaid under `node_modules/.bin/mmdc`.
 
 ### PhantomJS
 

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