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new 52c913d Update presentation-tips.adoc text tweaks and fixed a link
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commit 52c913dca62cadb6eef48970e6c60e20681ac8b3
Author: Andrew Wetmore <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Mon Jun 30 03:59:23 2025 -0300
Update presentation-tips.adoc text tweaks and fixed a link (#116)
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site/src/site/asciidoc/users/presentation-tips.adoc | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/site/src/site/asciidoc/users/presentation-tips.adoc
b/site/src/site/asciidoc/users/presentation-tips.adoc
index 2c60d03..f2e9544 100644
--- a/site/src/site/asciidoc/users/presentation-tips.adoc
+++ b/site/src/site/asciidoc/users/presentation-tips.adoc
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
== Presentation Tips
-This document discusses how to effectively use Apache Training presentations.
+This document discusses how to use Apache Training presentations effectively.
=== Opening a presentation
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ these presentations, you'll probably be presenting from your
local build
of the slides.
You'll do this by getting a checkout of the presentation, making your
-edits, and building it locally. The process for this is covered in
-link::index.html#/getting-started[Getting Started], but is recapped here:
+edits, and building it locally. We cover The process for this in
+link:index.html#/getting-started[Getting Started], but recap it here:
[code]
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@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ some tips for ensuring that you represent the ASF well.
rephrasing some of them in your own words to make the presentation
feel more natural.
* Practice giving the presentation. If you can, record yourself, and
- watch with a critical eye, or perhaps in front of a friend who is
+ watch with a critical eye, or perhaps give the presentation for a friend who
is
willing to give constructive feedback.
* If you're giving a talk in person, arrive at the venue a little early
to be sure you can get your slides on the screen, and that everything
