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commit 1288c1f66ba058dc879288127fc4835ba086bfdf
Author: Justin Mclean <[email protected]>
AuthorDate: Tue Oct 7 07:50:06 2025 +1100
make slides clearer
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issues later.
== Why Third-Party Branding Matters
* Protecting the Apache Name
-* Preventing Misrepresentation
-* Preserving Vendor Neutrality
-* Reducing Graduation Risks
+* Ensuring proper use of the brand
+* Promoting vendor neutrality
+* Supporting graduation
[.notes]
--
-Introduce these four themes as the foundation of the session.
-Each connects to ASF principles: shared stewardship, transparency, and
independence.
-You’ll expand on each with real-world examples and good practices.
+Branding shapes how the project is seen and trusted.
+The Apache name can be used by third parties, but only with proper attribution
and context.
+Clarify or correct misleading use early.
+Keep messaging vendor-neutral.
+Clear, consistent branding shows maturity and readiness to graduate.
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== Protecting the Apache Name
@@ -98,16 +100,14 @@ Protecting the brand helps maintain ASF’s collective
credibility.
== Preventing Misrepresentation
-* Third parties may promote software or services as “official” when they are
not.
-* Without clarification, users may assume the ASF endorses a product or
company.
-* Friendly early conversations help maintain trust and avoid confusion.
+* Third parties must not present software or services as “official” Apache
offerings.
+* If this occurs, a friendly early clarification helps maintain trust and
prevent confusion.
[.notes]
--
-Misrepresentation is often unintentional.
-Vendors may not understand ASF’s structure or naming requirements.
-Approach corrections gently: thank them for their enthusiasm, explain how ASF
works, and share the branding page link.
-Positive engagement builds relationships while protecting integrity.
+Misrepresentation is usually unintentional, many vendors simply don’t
understand ASF’s naming or branding rules.
+Respond early and politely: acknowledge their support, explain how ASF naming
works, and share the branding guidance link.
+A friendly clarification protects community trust and the reputation of the
Apache brand.
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== Preserving Vendor Neutrality