Yogiz wrote: > Seems like a nice recommendation letter, just a couple of observations: > > 1) Letter of recommendation is an official document and thus contracted > forms are not advisable. "what's" => "what is" > 2) Isn't two-week trip supposed to be without the dash? > 3) "Sincerely" and your contacts should be aligned to left as all the > rest of the text. > > Other then that it looks fine. I might be mistaken about the second > point, English is not my first language. > > Best of luck to you for your next writing task and I can assure you > that we all hope that Jodie will get the job! I hope we can read your > next piece of writing soon. > > Thanks and regards, > Yogiz > > On Wed, 22 Apr 2009 17:42:39 -0800 > Ben Hussey <brettja...@frumppyoldwoman.com> wrote: > >> Jodie, >> Here is the letter; let me know if you need any changes. I'll print >> a copy out to sign and have you send out, see you at home! >> -Ben Oh man, this is really awkward. ...Yet somehow awesome; I have new hope for the openmoko community.
-Ben P.S. Thanks for all the proof reading, your pointers are appreciated. _______________________________________________ Openmoko community mailing list community@lists.openmoko.org http://lists.openmoko.org/mailman/listinfo/community