Laszlo KREKACS <laszlo.krekacs.l...@gmail.com> writes: > Dear list, > > Im toying with the idea, of creating a Paroli introduction video, > where I present all the > basic phone functionality of paroli. Short of a tutorial, where I can > point the newcomers to. > > I have began to shoot the video, and made about 5 min, where I needed > to cut off. > The video is not finished, and I will reshoot it, as it is blurry, and > shacked the camera a lot. > > However, I will be not able reshoot it before wednesday or later next week. > > So Im posting this *work-in-progress* 10% made video to the community > hoping that > somebody with willing to record the audio will join me, and others > will have some > feedbacks too. I also hoping, if some of you have done video editing > before, and > can adjust the background sound, with voice, and finalise the video > will step up, and > help me. > > Otherwise I will reshoot the video next week, and put online as-is. I > hope it will > be less blurry (the lcd is broken in my camera, so cant see anything > while filming;-|) > > What I really like in this video, is how speedy paroli is. There is > not much waiting, the > video is realtime, was absolutely no editing in it. > > http://www.vimeo.com/5029019 > > Feedbacks?
I really liked this video. It made me smile, and got me interested in Paroli. I liked the little surprises, the way the signs were used creatively. Constructive critisicm: please improve the readability of the signs by improving contrast in them. Dont use "hollowed out" lettering. I had difficulty reading some of the signs. I still think the signs should be hand-made though, it adds to the flavour. Maybe you could make a hand-drawn skin for Paroli? I would use it :) > Laszlo > > PS: bear in mind, that this is my first video. Dont be too harsh. -- Joakim Verona _______________________________________________ Openmoko community mailing list community@lists.openmoko.org http://lists.openmoko.org/mailman/listinfo/community