From the Editorial Desk... Here's a list of typos and editorial improvements for the RC2 installer splash screens:
1. "Get the most from the internet" screen: "...selected the best softwares for your..." should be "...selected the best software for your..." 2. "User Interfaces" screen: "...which can be fully modified..." should be "...that can be fully modified..." 3. "Optimize your security" screen: "...which allow..." should be "...that allow..." 4. "Mandrakesoft Store" screen: "goodies", should be "goodies," (The comma should be inside the quotes.) 5. "Become a Mandrake Expert" screen: "...help your others by becoming..." should be "...help others by becoming..." 6. "Turn your machine into a reliable server" screen: "...in a few clicks of your mouse" is better as "...with a few clicks of your mouse" Rich -- ars Cognita Richard Tango-Lowy --------------------- President [EMAIL PROTECTED] 603 424-0713
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