Hi Frank,

Looks good. With regard to a test being too simple or straightforward, it can be subjective. I mean, what are easy to the author/you may not for others who don't have the knowledge on the particular subject matter. So it's always good to leave comments when you are there. It's also helpful for the author/you to remember what's done and why should you revisit them.

Cheers,
Joe

On 4/2/2015 8:30 PM, Frank Yuan wrote:

Hi Joe

Thank you for your comments, I have updated at http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~fyuan/8051559/webrev.02/ <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/%7Efyuan/8051559/webrev.02/>

Please also check my comments in line below

Best Regards

Frank

*From:*huizhe wang [mailto:huizhe.w...@oracle.com]
*Sent:* Friday, April 03, 2015 10:02 AM
*To:* Frank Yuan
*Cc:* 'Lance Andersen'; 'Core-Libs-Dev'; 'Gustavo Galimberti'
*Subject:* Re: Review request for JDK-8051559: JAXP function dom tests conversion

DocumentTest->testCreateElementNeg, the conversion seems to be incorrect. The original test, as the Javadoc stated, "This checks for the constuctor of DOMException ". The new test however, only verifies that an Exception is thrown.

//I moved a part of original DomExcpTestas testCreateElementNeg into DocumentTest, and write some code for DOMException, but as you known, class DOMException is so simple, JCK test has covered what I/original DomExcpTest test, Shura suggested me to remove this test from ours, then I did as his comment.



Comments for tests such as testCreateAttributeNSNeg can be more descriptive, for example, "Test for createAttributeNS method: verifies that DOMException is thrown if reserved prefixes are used with an arbitrary namespace name."

//Modified the comments to be more descriptive as your example on the similar cases.



The original tests that made up DocumentTypeTest had comments that you may want to copy over or rewrite as you did other tests.

//Because I thought this test is so straightforward, I didn't add comment for it. However, I added comments as your suggestion.



The comment for EntityChildTest can be "Test DOM Parser: parsing an xml file that contains external entities."

//changed the comment



NodeListTest: @summary Verifies a bug found in jaxp1.0.1 and 1.1FCS. After going out of bound, the last element of a NodeList returns null. The bug has been fixed in jaxp 1.1.1 build.

//changed the comment



Thanks,
Joe

On 4/1/2015 4:01 AM, Frank Yuan wrote:

    Hi Joe and Lance

    Many thanks for your review and comments!

    I have added the comments to the tests as your suggestions except
    some test method is very simple, the method name/code can present
    all information, e.g. method testHasFeature in
    DomImplementationTest.java. Please check my update in
    http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~fyuan/8051559/webrev.01/
    <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/%7Efyuan/8051559/webrev.01/>

    As well, I understand your suggestion about the code comment, I
    will think about how to add the comment on the viewpoint of the
    other code reader in my future work, thank you!

    Best Regards

    Frank

    *From:*huizhe wang [mailto:huizhe.w...@oracle.com]
    *Sent:* Wednesday, April 01, 2015 1:14 PM
    *To:* Lance Andersen
    *Cc:* Frank Yuan; Core-Libs-Dev; Gustavo Galimberti
    *Subject:* Re: Review request for JDK-8051559: JAXP function dom
    tests conversion

    Hi Frank,

    I did see the request, just didn't have time to look at it.

    I again agree with Lance, that these tests were written over 10
    years ago, it would be valuable to write down whatever
    understanding you gained while converting the tests, same as the
    Astro application/test, the goal of each test and how it works
    would all be helpful. Basically, it would be nice to add some
    comment on @Test.

    I tried the tests. They worked fine with my current build (with
    some changes).

    Thanks,
    Joe

    On 3/31/2015 7:10 AM, Lance Andersen wrote:

        Hi Frank

        On Mar 31, 2015, at 7:24 AM, Lance @ Oracle
        <lance.ander...@oracle.com <mailto:lance.ander...@oracle.com>>
        wrote:




            Hi frank

            Can you forward the other review request as I think I
            thought they were the same and deleted it

        Ignore this comment, the subjects were too similar but this is
        what needed reviewed.


            I will look at this again today

        The tests overall look fine.

        I still have the same comment WRT providing a simple comment
        describing each test.  The key point to remember is we want to
        make it easier for someone to  look at the test, understand
        what you are trying to validate, and understand the coverage
        of the tests.  This will help future maintainers of the code.
         Comments are just as important in test code as it is in
        implementation IMHO.

        Best

        Lance


            Best

            Lance


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            On Mar 31, 2015, at 4:15 AM, Frank Yuan
            <frank.y...@oracle.com <mailto:frank.y...@oracle.com>> wrote:

                Hi Joe



                Do you have any comment for dom suite co-location?



                Best Regards

                Frank



                From: Frank Yuan [mailto:frank.y...@oracle.com]
                Sent: Wednesday, March 25, 2015 5:46 PM
                To: 'huizhe wang'; 'Core-Libs-Dev'
                Cc: 'jibing chen'; 'Gustavo Galimberti';
                sandeep.konch...@oracle.com
                <mailto:sandeep.konch...@oracle.com>;
                'Alexandre (Shura) Iline'
                Subject: RE: Review request for JDK-8051559: JAXP
                function dom tests
                conversion



                Hi, Joe and All



                We are working on moving internal jaxp functional
                tests to open jdk repo.

                This is the dom suite. Would you please review these
                test?  Any comment will
                be appreciated.



                bug: https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8051559

                webrev:
                http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~fyuan/8051559/webrev.00/
                <http://cr.openjdk.java.net/%7Efyuan/8051559/webrev.00/>



                Thanks,



                Frank

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