Hi Pavel,

Yes, I think that would be an improvement.
But its a slippery slope beyond what you originally observed and wanted to fix.

Thanks, Roger


On 5/15/20 11:59 AM, Pavel Rappo wrote:
On 15 May 2020, at 16:53, Roger Riggs <roger.ri...@oracle.com> wrote:

Hi Pavel,

No problem with the "with" -> "by" changes.

javax/naming/NameNotFoundException.java: 55
   "initialized" -> "are initialized"

java/util/jar/Attributes.java:594
   The period was in the correct place.
   The second sentence is a separate comment about the use (non-use).
I considered that initially, but then saw how it was used on the adjacent field:

   /**
    * {@code Name} object for {@code Extension-List} manifest attribute
    * used for the extension mechanism that is no longer supported.
    */
   public static final Name EXTENSION_LIST;

Would you suggest making a similar fix here?

  "used for the extension mechanism that is no longer supported."

Would read better as:
    "This name is obsolete, the extension mechanism is no longer supported."

$.02, Roger


On 5/15/20 10:00 AM, Daniel Fuchs wrote:
Hi Pavel,

This looks good to me - but English is not my native language ;-)

cheers,

-- daniel

On 15/05/2020 13:35, Pavel Rappo wrote:
Hello,

Please review this trivial change for 
https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8245111:

    http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~prappo/8245111/webrev.00/

In addition to fixing the main issue, this includes a blanket change from "followed with" 
to "followed by" as the latter seemed idiomatic to me.

-Pavel


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