Hi,
I don't know if there is any format that I can fit in, so I just wrote
my suggestion with a beginning *** at the end of each paragraph.
Best Regard
Hou Pei
The idea of having single career is becoming old-fashioned one. The
new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money
and further education will be something throughout the life.
***The idea of having a single career is becoming old-fashioned
***further education will be needed throughout the whole life
In today's world, technology has developed enormously. Perhaps, this
is the main cause for people with single profession living their lives
horribly. These days Multi National Companies, other small companies
and even brides are demanding a multi-talented person. Certainly,
people who are with multiple talents are ruling this world greatly.
***In today's world, technology has developed enormously. which
perhaps accounts for the horrible livings of people with a single
profession
***These days multi-national companies, small companies and even
brides are demanding multi-talented job applicants
*** Certainly multi-talented people are ruling this world greatly.
In olden days, people were used to have merely single profession. It
was not much tough to live their lives. Many people were used to do
jobs under farmers' cultivated field or had there own business like
making pots etc. Due to there hard work they got fame and their
products were used to be sold in large proportion. Therefore, without
technology people had came across many difficulties, but at least
managed to earn bread and milk.
*** In the past, people used to work in a single profession
***It was not so tough to support their lives
***in farmer's cultivated field
***their own business
*** Because of their hard work, they got fame and their products were
sold in large quantities.
***without technology people had come across many difficulties
Compared, with an enhancement in technology in modern days, many jobs
are not in use and it is quite impossible to get a job without
multiple skills. For instance, bank employees have been losing their
jobs because many people now use ATM's for withdrawing money and even
use home computer for local transactions. Similarly, travel agencies
and retail stores are now trading on-line through computers. The
people who were doing these jobs faced many problems and later
realized to upgrade their skills. Competition has increased, small
businesses are now no longer in existence because large corporations
are paying more and getting more revenue. Therefore, the people who
were in small businesses had great lose and had nothing to start it
again. In addition, in this developing world labors are extreme cheap.
So in industries like textile, cement etc, there is no place to find a
job because almost work is being done by machines like loading and
unloading of materials etc.
***In comparison, today technology is highly enhanced and takes over
many jobs.It is quite impossible for people to get a job without
multiple skills.
***trading on-line by computers.
***The people, who were doing these jobs before,are facing many
problems and later realize to upgrade their skills.
***Competition is increasing, so small businesses are now no longer in
existence because large corporations are getting more revenue and
paying more.
***the people who were in small businesses have great losses and have
nothing to startup again.
Education plays a crucial role in human's life. Firstly, more
preference ought to be given to studies rather than other activities
like part time-jobs. Many technical institutes are being run by
charitable trusts. It is an opportunity to learn computers at lowest
fee. Therefore, along with education technical skills can be improved.
Hence, the thing is one should be enthusiastic to attain his goals,
some like holding higher qualification, to gain extensive technical
knowledge and making good money would definitely lead to live a
luxuries life.
*** the lowest fee
***along with education, technical skills can be improved
***Hence, one should be enthusiastic to attain his goals, to hold
higher qualification, to gain extensive technical knowledge. Making
good money would definitely lead to live a luxury life.
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