Hello everyone, I'd like to ask you for some help. A friend of mine has just given me short...well...sort of an advertisement, written in his native language. I'm not sure, but the form and wording of it is somewhat...weird, perhaps. It should look like an informal letter (I guess), which will become a part of a photo (on which the marketing manager will be depicted). Here it is:
"... Hello! Accept our greetings from [TOWN NAME], a small town in which our football club resides. After several successful progress years, we have now become participants of the second highest competition in the country. Our next goal is clear - the 1st Football League. We are looking for partners who will support us, and who will become the co-authors of the other accomplishments. Come in with us! For the Fotbal [TOWN NAME] a. s., [MANAGER'S NAME] Marketing Manager ..." Thanks for any corrections or suggestions in advance!!! (by the way, German translations would be helpful, too :-)))) Best wishes, Petr --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Correct my English" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/correct-my-english -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
