Excellent use of sound bites. The fact that they nailed the collaboration vs. competition point so well is a testament to you (and/or, a rather smart writer). Also great that you showed some "social proof" in the point about there being some members already.
Your intentions and goals are clear, and your attitude comes across well in the quotes. This is some of the best "first time" press I've seen for coworking. REALLY well done. -Alex -- /ah indyhall.org coworking in philadelphia On Tuesday, July 17, 2012 at 3:52 PM, Shenoa Lawrence wrote: > We've been open at our own dedicated location for 3 weeks now, and the first > bit of media coverage just came out: > http://www.tricitiesbusinessnews.com/2012/07/coworking-group-gets-literal-with-room-to-think/ > > Feedback welcome! I'm hoping there will be more opportunities in the future > to have conversations about what we're doing. If you can see any specific > areas in which we need to improve our dialog (quotables), please let me know. > > Shenoa Lawrence > Room to Think > http://rm2think.com > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "Coworking" group. > To view this discussion on the web visit > https://groups.google.com/d/msg/coworking/-/8oxtdlqZn5kJ. > To post to this group, send email to coworking@googlegroups.com > (mailto:coworking@googlegroups.com). > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > coworking+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com > (mailto:coworking+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com). > For more options, visit this group at > http://groups.google.com/group/coworking?hl=en. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Coworking" group. To post to this group, send email to coworking@googlegroups.com. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to coworking+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/coworking?hl=en.
