PKIX-TA looks better than PKIX-CA; CA makes it look like it has to be an
association to a root cert.

It would be nice to have a better short description for type 3 than
Domain-issued certificate, notwithstanding the existance of that string
in rfc 6698.  DANE isn't about issuing certs, but rather about
establishing trust paths to them.  But I cannot come up with an
alternative.... 

Nits:

The paragraph: "It is expected that DANE parser's in applications and
DNS software MAY adopt parsing the acronyms for each field, installed
base MAY NOT get updated." could use better grammar.  Perhaps:

  s/each field, installed base/each field, but the installed base/

And perhaps /MAY NOT/may not/.  Unlike the first MAY, the may not isn't
really a 2119.  (The Nits link agrees.)

In the xml, I'd do:

   s(<c>CA     constraint</c>)(<c>CA constraint</c>)

it should look better in the output.

-JimC
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James Cloos <[email protected]>         OpenPGP: 1024D/ED7DAEA6


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