Following my email from yesterday,
I have gotten a second wind and now released the second major draft
of my Lightning Talk, at
http://darrenduncan.net/OSCON/OSCON2005LightningTalk.txt .
Large changes were made so that it reads better is shorter, and is
easier to understand, while still saying everything important. Many
parts were reordered and summarized. I didn't get any feedback on it
yet, but no worries.
This new version clocks in at a few seconds over 5 minutes on my last
reading, so I'll want to shave it some more, but the hard work is
done.
I still would appreciate any feedback should you find any parts of
the talk confusing or incorrect. Likewise, any further edit
suggestions for length. Likewise, anything I should say but didn't,
or didn't but should.
I can take suggestions any time through the next week, though earlier
is better.
Also, despite my previous statement, I may try to have some visuals
after all, rather than this being all spoken.
Thank you. -- Darren Duncan
