Hi Martin, On Tue, Apr 22, 2014, at 21:40, martin f krafft wrote: > There's a latexdiff attached… > > After today's meeting with the lawyer (Dr. Michael Stehmann, who is > doing this for us for free! Thanks!), I've made a last couple of > touch-ups and the attached PDF is pretty much ready to go for > pre-checks with the financial authorities. Not sure we'll get any > feedback in time for the meeting Heidelberg, but it's worth a try, > and sending it to them at this stage means expedited handling later. > > Comments still welcome, of course. Nothing's set in stone yet.
Overall, looks pretty awesome, and certainly like an association I'd like to be part of. :-) Mad props to Dr. Stehmann. A few more comments, though: * If we define a "Rumpfgeschäftsjahr" anyway, I'd let the "Geschäftsjahr" start at April 1st. More in line with other cycles, and pushes the end of the Rumpfgeschäftsjahr further away from DC15. * In "jegliche, geschlechtsbasierende Diskriminierung", loose the comma. * "des Vereinszweck" needs a tailing "s" * The document is not gendered completely, I especially found §6b, §6d6-8 notable. Might have been easier to put a "male gender covers both" into the preamble, but I'm not sure if this is legally possible or we want that. * There is no mention on how to close a ressort again, or if it can close itself. Thank you for all the hard work. Cheers, Philipp _______________________________________________ Debconf-team mailing list [email protected] http://lists.debconf.org/mailman/listinfo/debconf-team
