Great thanks Bernelle for the feedback,

is this the final copy then, for now?

Regards
Tammy

On Thu, Nov 5, 2015 at 10:15 PM, Bernelle Verster <[email protected]>
wrote:

> Hi Tammy
>
> I've reworked the paragraph text, how does this work for you?
> I've also removed the links from the action points - we should rather
> work them into the website, so people have one point to go to.
>
>
>
> DebConf is the annual conference for Debian contributors and users
> interested in improving the Debian project, one of the largest Free
> Software projects worldwide. The Debian Project is an association of
> volunteer individuals who have made common cause to create an
> operating system comprised entirely of Free Software.
>
> Once a year they gather and concentrate on the development and
> improvement of the Debian distribution. DebConf is a combination of
> concurrent scheduled talks, plenaries, development sprints, hacking
> time and ad-hoc meetings and sessions. In 2016, DebConf will be hosted
> in Cape Town, South Africa, for the first time.
>
> Get involved!
>
> * Learn more about Debian
> * Join us at Debian Day, open to the public
> * Watch past talks
> * Exhibit at the Information Art expo during DebConf
> * Participate in the ShowMeBox
> * Sponsor! Contact [email protected] for assistance
>
> DebConf is organized solely by volunteers and a fair amount of
> attendees are subsidised to attend, from across the globe, thanks to
> generous support. Our sponsorship levels and some of the perks
> associated with them are:
>
>
>
>
>
> The flyer text still lives here: http://deb.li/flyer16
> There is also feedback on the brochure on that page. I've also copied
> this to the titanpad for ease of reference.
> (https://titanpad.com/DC16-sponsorship-brochure-tiny-issues)
>
> regards
> B
>
> On Thu, Nov 5, 2015 at 9:36 PM, Michael Banck <[email protected]> wrote:
> > Hi Tammy,
> >
> > On Wed, Nov 04, 2015 at 04:23:51PM +0000, Tammy via Dropbox wrote:
> >> Please see the Flyer: the Flyer PDF is 3 Options of layout, and the
> >> Inkscape Options are added separately but are large files. Still to be
> >> added are Options 2 and Options 3 in the Inkscape format.
> >
> > Wow, great!
> >
> >> Some of the info doesn't fit due to the table taking up most of the
> >> space but on the Landscape option I can get more in.
> >
> > I looked at the PDF version, and there's something weird going on with
> > the table: row 7 is empty, and the text of the left-most column has lots
> > of padding on the right. Was row 7 too long?  Maybe it can be rephrased
> > then.
> >
> > But that's the only obvious issue I saw at first glance, it's looking
> > great otherwise IMO.
> >
> >
> > Michael
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