dann frazier wrote:
> Thanks for working on this. Here's some suggested that helped clarify
> the language for me, and includes some stronger wording around the d-i
> network console issue (Frans may have something better though).
I spotted one typo:
> +<p>Existing Debian GNU/Linux 4.0 installation CDs and DVDs can continue to be
> +used to install this update. After installation, upgrading via an up-to-date
> +Debian mirror will cause any out of date packages to be updated. However,
> users
> +of the network-console installation method are strongly encouraged to update
> +their media, see the "Debian Installer" portion of this announcment for
^e
(And how about a semicolon on the same line before "see"?)
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sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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