Quoting Sorina - Gabriela Sandu (sandu.sor...@gmail.com): > Hello! > > On Wed, Jun 27, 2012 at 10:10 AM, Justin B Rye <j...@edlug.org.uk> wrote: > > Christian PERRIER wrote: > >>> Type: select > >>> Choices: ${essid_list}, Enter ESSID manually > >>> Description: Select wireless network > >>> - Select desired network name (ESSID) to attempt to connect. > >>> + Select desired network name (ESSID) attempt connecting to. > >> > >> Hmmm, Sorina, I'm not sure this is really an improvement..:-) > > I believe it is not :) > > > Neither version is quite grammatical; what an ordinary native-speaker > > would say is something like: > > > > Select desired network name (ESSID) to attempt to connect to. > > > > However, I suspect a lot of people would find this triple "to" > > offputting; even native-speakers are often taught a taboo against > > ending sentences with prepositions. You could reduce the number of > > repeats by taking the "attempt" part for granted: > > > > Select desired network name (ESSID) to connect to. > > > > Or you could mangle it to shift the final preposition: > > > > Select the network name (ESSID) to which a connection should be > > attempted. > > > > But I suspect the best solution is: > > > > Select desired network name (ESSID) for connection attempt. > > Hello! > > Thanks for the help, as you've seen I'm not very good with this things :) > > I've updated it to the solution you considered the best.
Also: Description: Select wireless network should be turned into: Description: Wireless network: as the short part (the synopsis) is meant to be a "prompt" when showed to users. As we're currently freezing D-I, please do *not* commit this additionnal template to netcfg trunk...unless you remove the leading "_" that marks it for translation.
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