Package: prebaseconfig Severity: normal Well, this one is maybe more important than others....At least, ALL users of d-i will see it....
So, please, native English speakers, check my suggestions... Detailed rationale: Template: prebaseconfig/reboot_in_progress Type: note -_Description: The machine will now reboot. - When you reboot the system, you'll need to make sure you are booting +_Description: System reboot + The system will now reboot. + . + Before this reboot occurs, you'll need to make sure you are booting from the right media. . - If you are booting from the local disk, make sure there are no + If you are booting from the local disk, check that there are no floppies in the floppy drives and no CD-ROM in the tray. If you made - a custom boot floppy and want to boot from that, you should put that - floppy in the first floppy drive. Finally, you can restart the - installation system by booting from your install media. + a custom boot floppy and want to boot from it, you should put that + floppy in the first floppy drive. + . + You may also restart the installation system by booting from your + installation media. . Please take care of all that before you continue. 1) Make this look more like a title 2) ....thus add "The system will now reboot" as a separated paragraph. "system" seems better than "machine" to me... 3) Before this reboot occurs is maybe not the best possible. English speakers needed..:-) 4) s/make sure/check that : look sbetter to me but your mileage may vary 5) boot from it or boot from that? I add a paragraph as the suggestion for rebooting from the install(ation) media is another idea and should appear more easily, imho -- System Information: Debian Release: testing/unstable Architecture: i386 Kernel: Linux mykerinos 2.4.22 #2 Mon Sep 29 15:12:10 CEST 2003 i686 Locale: LANG=fr_FR.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=fr_FR.UTF-8 (ignored: LC_ALL set to fr_FR.UTF-8) -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]