Package: cdrom-detect Severity: normal Tags: patch d-i Now usual debconf templates polishing bug report.
Proofreading by native English speakers needed. Chris, I'm sure you're reading this..:) Detailed rationale: Template: cdrom-detect/manual_config Type: boolean Default: true -_Description: Do you want to manually select the CDROM module and device ? - No common CDROM reader was detected. But you may have an old Mitsumi or - another non-IDE, non-SCSI CDROM reader. In that case you can indicate - which module to load and which device to use. If you don't know what - module and device are needed, look for some documentation or try a net - install instead of a CDROM install. +_Description: Manually select the CD-ROM module and device? + No common CD-ROM reader was detected. + . + Your CD-ROM reader may be an old Mitsumi or another non-IDE, non-SCSI + CD-ROM reader. In that case you may choose which module to load and + which device to use. If you don't know what module and device are + needed, look for some documentation or try a network installation + instead of a CD-ROM installation. 1) Removed space before question mark. Shorten the question 2) Better readability by splitting in two paragraphs with the most important one at the top 3) s/CDROM/CD-ROM for general d-i consistency 4) Drop the "but you may have".....which seems too french to me..:-) English native speakers, please proofread this 2nd paragraph Template: cdrom-detect/is_cd_inserted Type: boolean Default: false -_Description: Perform manual CD configuration ? - Your installation CD couldn't be mounted. That probably means that the CD - is not yet inserted. If that's the case, just insert it and don't perform - the manual configuration; the CD mount will be re-tried. If your CD was - already in the drive, there was another problem; try the manual CD - configuration. +_Description: Perform manual CD-ROM configuration? + Your installation CD-ROM couldn't be mounted. + . + That probably means that the CD-ROM is not yet inserted. If that's the case, + just insert it and don't perform the manual configuration. The CD-ROM mount + will be re-tried. + . + If your CD-ROM was already in the drive, some other problem happened. You + should then try the manual CD-ROM configuration. 1) Removed space before QM 2) split into paragraphs for readability. Minor rewrite of the third one Template: cdrom-detect/cdrom_module Type: select Choices: ${choices} Default: none -_Description: Select a module to load for the CDROM support - Apparently the autodetection didn't find any CDROM reader. You can try to - load one of the modules if you have a specific CDROM reader (that is +_Description: Module needed for accessing the CD-ROM: + The automatic detection didn't find any CD-ROM reader. You can try to + load a specific module if you have a specific CD-ROM reader (that is neither IDE nor SCSI). 1) Short desc=prompt 2) Just give facts..:-) Template: cdrom-detect/cdrom_device Type: string Default: /dev/cdrom -_Description: Give the corresponding device file - In order to get access to your CDROM reader, I must know which device file - should be used since non-standard CDROM readers use non-standard device - files (like /dev/mcdx for example). +_Description: Device file for accessing the CD-ROM: + In order to get access to your CD-ROM reader, please enter which device file + should be used. Non-standard CD-ROM readers use non-standard device + files (such as /dev/mcdx). . You may switch to the shell on the second terminal (ALT+F2) to check the - available devices in /dev with "ls /dev". You can come back here with - ALT+F1. + available devices in /dev with "ls /dev". You can come back to this screen + with ALT+F1. 1) Prompt 2) s/CDROM/CD-ROM 3) removed 1st person. English proofreading needed 4) s/here/to this screen Template: cdrom-detect/success Type: note -_Description: A CDROM has been detected. - CD autodetection worked. A CDROM reader has been found with the following - CD inserted : ${cdname} You can continue the install. +_Description: CD-ROM detected + The CD-ROM autodetection was successful. A CD-ROM reader has been found. It + currently contains this CD: ${cdname}. The installation process may continue. 1) Short desc==title 2) "worked" is a bit trivial, isn't it? Proofreading needed Template: cdrom-detect/no-cd Type: error -_Description: No CD was detected - Please make sure that there is a CD in the CDROM reader. +_Description: No CD detected + Please check that a CD has been inserted in the CD-ROM reader. 1) Title so no phrase required...but is this correct? 2) Minor rephrase Template: cdrom-detect/wrong-cd Type: error -_Description: A CDROM has been detected, but it isn't a Debian CD +_Description: Non-Debian CD-ROM detected + A CDROM has been detected, but it isn't a Debian CD. + . Please make sure that the correct CD is inserted. 1) Title 2) Move the former short desc to extended description Template: cdrom-detect/skip_autodetection Type: boolean Default: false -_Description: Do you want to skip CDROM autodetection ? - You may want to try this if autodetection is causing trouble. Otherwise - you really shouldn't; manual intervention will be required to mount the - CDROM on /cdrom before you can proceed. +_Description: Skip CD-ROM automatic detection? + You should skip the CD-ROM automatic detection only if it is causing trouble. + If you skip it, a manual intervention will be required to mount the + CD-ROM on /cdrom before you can proceed. 1) Removed space and shorten question 2) rephrase....proofreading needed Template: mirror/distribution Type: select _Choices: woody, sarge, sid Default: sarge -_Description: Select distribution to install - Please select which of the distributions you want to install. +_Description: Distribution branch to install: + Please select which of the Debian distribution branches you want to install: . - woody is the current stable release of Debian - sarge is the "testing" unreleased version of Debian - sid is "unstable" and will never be released. + - woody is the current stable release of Debian; + - sarge is the "testing" unreleased version of Debian; + - sid is "unstable" and will never be released. Consistency with the similar template in choose-mirror Template: debian-installer/cdrom-detect/title Type: text # Item in the main menu to select this package -_Description: Detect CDROM devices and mount the CD +_Description: Detect and mount CD-ROM Shorter....This should be enough and easier to translate in 58 chars..:-) -- System Information: Debian Release: testing/unstable Architecture: i386 Kernel: Linux mykerinos 2.4.22 #2 Mon Sep 29 15:12:10 CEST 2003 i686 Locale: LANG=fr_FR.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=fr_FR.UTF-8 (ignored: LC_ALL set to fr_FR.UTF-8)
--- cdrom-detect.templates.ori 2003-11-11 10:57:19.000000000 +0100 +++ cdrom-detect.templates 2003-11-11 10:56:43.000000000 +0100 @@ -1,80 +1,87 @@ Template: cdrom-detect/manual_config Type: boolean Default: true -_Description: Do you want to manually select the CDROM module and device ? - No common CDROM reader was detected. But you may have an old Mitsumi or - another non-IDE, non-SCSI CDROM reader. In that case you can indicate - which module to load and which device to use. If you don't know what - module and device are needed, look for some documentation or try a net - install instead of a CDROM install. +_Description: Manually select the CD-ROM module and device? + No common CD-ROM reader was detected. + . + Your CD-ROM reader may be an old Mitsumi or another non-IDE, non-SCSI + CD-ROM reader. In that case you may choose which module to load and + which device to use. If you don't know what module and device are + needed, look for some documentation or try a network installation + instead of a CD-ROM installation. Template: cdrom-detect/is_cd_inserted Type: boolean Default: false -_Description: Perform manual CD configuration ? - Your installation CD couldn't be mounted. That probably means that the CD - is not yet inserted. If that's the case, just insert it and don't perform - the manual configuration; the CD mount will be re-tried. If your CD was - already in the drive, there was another problem; try the manual CD - configuration. +_Description: Perform manual CD-ROM configuration? + Your installation CD-ROM couldn't be mounted. + . + That probably means that the CD-ROM is not yet inserted. If that's the case, + just insert it and don't perform the manual configuration. The CD-ROM mount + will be re-tried. + . + If your CD-ROM was already in the drive, some other problem happened. You + should then try the manual CD-ROM configuration. Template: cdrom-detect/cdrom_module Type: select Choices: ${choices} Default: none -_Description: Select a module to load for the CDROM support - Apparently the autodetection didn't find any CDROM reader. You can try to - load one of the modules if you have a specific CDROM reader (that is +_Description: Module needed for accessing the CD-ROM: + The automatic detection didn't find any CD-ROM reader. You can try to + load a specific module if you have a specific CD-ROM reader (that is neither IDE nor SCSI). Template: cdrom-detect/cdrom_device Type: string Default: /dev/cdrom -_Description: Give the corresponding device file - In order to get access to your CDROM reader, I must know which device file - should be used since non-standard CDROM readers use non-standard device - files (like /dev/mcdx for example). +_Description: Device file for accessing the CD-ROM: + In order to get access to your CD-ROM reader, please enter which device file + should be used. Non-standard CD-ROM readers use non-standard device + files (such as /dev/mcdx). . You may switch to the shell on the second terminal (ALT+F2) to check the - available devices in /dev with "ls /dev". You can come back here with - ALT+F1. + available devices in /dev with "ls /dev". You can come back to this screen + with ALT+F1. Template: cdrom-detect/success Type: note -_Description: A CDROM has been detected. - CD autodetection worked. A CDROM reader has been found with the following - CD inserted : ${cdname} You can continue the install. +_Description: CD-ROM detected + The CD-ROM autodetection was successful. A CD-ROM reader has been found. It + currently contains this CD: ${cdname}. The installation process may continue. Template: cdrom-detect/no-cd Type: error -_Description: No CD was detected - Please make sure that there is a CD in the CDROM reader. +_Description: No CD detected + Please check that a CD has been inserted in the CD-ROM reader. Template: cdrom-detect/wrong-cd Type: error -_Description: A CDROM has been detected, but it isn't a Debian CD +_Description: Non-Debian CD-ROM detected + A CDROM has been detected, but it isn't a Debian CD. + . Please make sure that the correct CD is inserted. Template: cdrom-detect/skip_autodetection Type: boolean Default: false -_Description: Do you want to skip CDROM autodetection ? - You may want to try this if autodetection is causing trouble. Otherwise - you really shouldn't; manual intervention will be required to mount the - CDROM on /cdrom before you can proceed. +_Description: Skip CD-ROM automatic detection? + You should skip the CD-ROM automatic detection only if it is causing trouble. + If you skip it, a manual intervention will be required to mount the + CD-ROM on /cdrom before you can proceed. Template: mirror/distribution Type: select _Choices: woody, sarge, sid Default: sarge -_Description: Select distribution to install - Please select which of the distributions you want to install. +_Description: Distribution branch to install: + Please select which of the Debian distribution branches you want to install: . - woody is the current stable release of Debian - sarge is the "testing" unreleased version of Debian - sid is "unstable" and will never be released. + - woody is the current stable release of Debian; + - sarge is the "testing" unreleased version of Debian; + - sid is "unstable" and will never be released. Template: debian-installer/cdrom-detect/title Type: text # Item in the main menu to select this package -_Description: Detect CDROM devices and mount the CD +_Description: Detect and mount CD-ROM