On Tue, 2004-04-06 at 23:34, Konstantinos Margaritis wrote: > Hi, > I'm not sure about the correctness of the following string in > partman-target: > "Partitioning a hard drive consists of logically dividing it to create > the space needed to install your new Debian system. You need to > choose which partition(s) will be used for the installation of > Debian." > > I'm talking about the use of "consists of", shouldn't it be something > like: > "Partitioning a hard drive implies logically dividing it ..." > ...mmm...is kind of induces some kind of "loss of user's control" ideea > or > > "Partitioning a hard drive means logically dividing it..." > my first choice > or even > > "Partitioning a hard drive is the process of dividing it logically to > create..." > second (too formal) > I am not a native english speaker, but somehow the use of "consists > of" does not really feel proper here... > I feel the same way
> Anyway, just a thought... > > Konstantinos > Eddy -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]