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has caused the Debian Bug report #548472,
regarding sgt-puzzles: Help for blackbox partially wrong and very sloppy
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Package: sgt-puzzles
Version: 8541-2
Severity: normal
Tags: patch
While translating the sgt puzzle's help file to German I noticed that
black boxs help is written very sloppy (more on that below) and even
contains errors (cf. the following lines which I patched):
"As shown, it is possible for a ball to receive multiple reflections before "
"As shown, it is possible for a laser to receive multiple reflections before "
"re-emerging (see turn 3). Similarly, a ball may be reflected (possibly more "
"re-emerging (see turn 3). Similarly, a laser may be reflected (possibly more "
The patch is in line with the style of the remaining help. Howver, this style
is *very* sloppy. In the help, the refernce is always to laser which
enter and emerge the grid. This is confusing and wrong, as not the
laser but the laser beam (short: beam) is traversing the grid while
the laser of course remains stationary on the edge.
So I (additionally) suggest to replace most of the occurences of
"laser" by "laser beam" or simply "beam", e.g. in the following:
-"arena and observing how they are deflected."
+"arena and observing how their beams are deflected."
-"Lasers will fire straight until they hit the opposite side of the arena (at "
+"Lasers beam will traverse straight until they hit the opposite side of the
arena (at "
If you agree with the rewording, I can provide a complete patch.
-- System Information:
Debian Release: 5.0.3
APT prefers stable
APT policy: (500, 'stable')
Architecture: powerpc (ppc)
Kernel: Linux 2.6.24.3-grsec
Locale: LANG=de_DE.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=de_DE.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash
Versions of packages sgt-puzzles depends on:
ii libatk1.0-0 1.22.0-1 The ATK accessibility toolkit
ii libc6 2.7-18 GNU C Library: Shared libraries
ii libcairo2 1.6.4-7 The Cairo 2D vector graphics libra
ii libglib2.0-0 2.16.6-2 The GLib library of C routines
ii libgtk2.0-0 2.12.12-1~lenny1 The GTK+ graphical user interface
ii libpango1.0-0 1.20.5-5 Layout and rendering of internatio
Versions of packages sgt-puzzles recommends:
ii chimera2 [www-browser] 2.0a19-5 Web browser for X
ii iceweasel [www-browser] 3.0.6-3 lightweight web browser based on M
ii konqueror [www-browser] 4:3.5.9.dfsg.1-6 KDE's advanced file manager, web b
ii links [www-browser] 2.1pre37-1.1 Web browser running in text mode
ii lynx-cur [www-browser] 2.8.7dev9-2.1 Text-mode WWW Browser with NLS sup
ii w3m [www-browser] 0.5.2-2+b1 WWW browsable pager with excellent
ii yelp 2.22.1-8+b1 Help browser for GNOME 2
sgt-puzzles suggests no packages.
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Source: sgt-puzzles
Source-Version: 8786-1
We believe that the bug you reported is fixed in the latest version of
sgt-puzzles, which is due to be installed in the Debian FTP archive:
sgt-puzzles_8786-1.diff.gz
to main/s/sgt-puzzles/sgt-puzzles_8786-1.diff.gz
sgt-puzzles_8786-1.dsc
to main/s/sgt-puzzles/sgt-puzzles_8786-1.dsc
sgt-puzzles_8786-1_i386.deb
to main/s/sgt-puzzles/sgt-puzzles_8786-1_i386.deb
sgt-puzzles_8786.orig.tar.gz
to main/s/sgt-puzzles/sgt-puzzles_8786.orig.tar.gz
A summary of the changes between this version and the previous one is
attached.
Thank you for reporting the bug, which will now be closed. If you
have further comments please address them to [email protected],
and the maintainer will reopen the bug report if appropriate.
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Ben Hutchings <[email protected]> (supplier of updated sgt-puzzles package)
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Date: Mon, 15 Feb 2010 14:33:45 +0000
Source: sgt-puzzles
Binary: sgt-puzzles
Architecture: i386 source
Version: 8786-1
Distribution: unstable
Urgency: low
Maintainer: Ben Hutchings <[email protected]>
Changed-By: Ben Hutchings <[email protected]>
Closes: 522439 548472 554341
Description:
sgt-puzzles - Simon Tatham's Portable Puzzle Collection - 1-player puzzle games
Changes:
sgt-puzzles (8786-1) unstable; urgency=low
.
* New upstream version
- Correct minor documentation errors - closes: #522439, #548472
* Update German translation, thanks to Helge Kreutzmann
* Correct minor documentation errors, thanks to Helge Kreutzmann
- closes: #554341
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