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and subject line Bug#727672: fixed in gmusicbrowser 1.1.12+ds0-1
has caused the Debian Bug report #727672,
regarding gmusicbrowser: package description still bad
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Package: gmusicbrowser
Version: 1.1.10-2
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch
I've already reported this as a followup to bug #720760, but since
that has been marked "fixed" without correcting any of the problems I
pointed out I suppose I'd better give it its own bug number. (I only
count package description nitpicks like this as "wishlist", though.)
"http://bugs.debian.org/cgi-bin/bugreport.cgi?msg=10;bug=720760";
To repeat my review in abbreviated form:
> Description: graphic jukebox for large collections of mp3/ogg/flac/mpc files
* Word choice: you mean "graphical", not "graphic".
* There's no need to list all the file formats here.
* (And they shouldn't be all-lowercase anyway.)
* Saying that the collection is made up of files is also redundant.
> gmusicbrowser is a powerful graphic browser which supports libraries with
> a great number of songs (>10,000)
* Word choice: the number is "large", not "great".
* Use words ("above"), not mathematical notation (">").
* Missing final punctuation.
> .
> It can use multiple inputs and plays MP3, OGG and flac files; it also
> supports
* This list of file formats contradicts the synopsis!
* The canonical names are "MP3", "Ogg", and "FLAC".
> mass-renaming and mass-retagging of a song library, multiple genres per song,
> ratings and customizable labels
* This paragraph should be at least two sentences.
* Missing final punctuation.
> .
> The window layout is also customizable and it ships natively plugins to use
* Bad elision: these clauses have different subjects.
* Misplaced adverb "natively".
* The Debian package doesn't "ship" plugins, it "includes" them.
> last.fm, retrieve lyrics, find album pictures and WebContext which, through
* Broken-backed list (especially the relative subclause).
* Word choice: "using", not "through".
> the mozilla/webkit engine will display the wikipedia artist's page and search
> lyrics with google.
* Unclear subject of "will display".
* Wrong word order in "the wikipedia artist's page".
* You don't "search lyrics", you "search for lyrics".
* The canonical names are Last.fm/Mozilla/WebKit/Wikipedia/Google.
Revised version:
| Description: graphical jukebox for large music collections
| gmusicbrowser is a powerful graphical browser which supports libraries
| with a very large number of songs (over 10,000).
| .
| It can use multiple inputs and has native support for MP3, Ogg, and
| FLAC files. It also supports mass-renaming and mass-retagging of a song
| library, multiple genres per song, ratings, and customizable labels.
| .
| gmusicbrowser has a customizable window layout, and comes with plugins
| to use Last.fm, retrieve lyrics, or find album pictures and WebContext
| (using the Mozilla or WebKit engines to display the artist's page on
| Wikipedia and search for lyrics with Google).
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JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
diff -ru gmusicbrowser-1.1.10.pristine/debian/control gmusicbrowser-1.1.10/debian/control
--- gmusicbrowser-1.1.10.pristine/debian/control 2013-10-05 19:11:30.000000000 +0100
+++ gmusicbrowser-1.1.10/debian/control 2013-10-24 23:40:18.553134427 +0100
@@ -41,15 +41,15 @@
mpg321 | flac123 | ogg123,
mplayer,
vorbis-tools
-Description: graphic jukebox for large collections of mp3/ogg/flac/mpc files
- gmusicbrowser is a powerful graphic browser which supports libraries with
- a great number of songs (>10,000)
+Description: graphical jukebox for large music collections
+ gmusicbrowser is a powerful graphical browser which supports libraries
+ with a very large number of songs (over 10,000).
.
- It can use multiple inputs and plays MP3, OGG and flac files; it also supports
- mass-renaming and mass-retagging of a song library, multiple genres per song,
- ratings and customizable labels
+ It can use multiple inputs and has native support for MP3, Ogg, and
+ FLAC files. It also supports mass-renaming and mass-retagging of a song
+ library, multiple genres per song, ratings, and customizable labels.
.
- The window layout is also customizable and it ships natively plugins to use
- last.fm, retrieve lyrics, find album pictures and WebContext which, through
- the mozilla/webkit engine will display the wikipedia artist's page and search
- lyrics with google.
+ gmusicbrowser has a customizable window layout, and comes with plugins
+ to use Last.fm, retrieve lyrics, or find album pictures and WebContext
+ (using the Mozilla or WebKit engines to display the artist's page on
+ Wikipedia and search for lyrics with Google).
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Source: gmusicbrowser
Source-Version: 1.1.12+ds0-1
We believe that the bug you reported is fixed in the latest version of
gmusicbrowser, which is due to be installed in the Debian FTP archive.
A summary of the changes between this version and the previous one is
attached.
Thank you for reporting the bug, which will now be closed. If you
have further comments please address them to [email protected],
and the maintainer will reopen the bug report if appropriate.
Debian distribution maintenance software
pp.
Alessio Treglia <[email protected]> (supplier of updated gmusicbrowser package)
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Date: Sat, 08 Mar 2014 21:40:35 +0000
Source: gmusicbrowser
Binary: gmusicbrowser
Architecture: source all
Version: 1.1.12+ds0-1
Distribution: unstable
Urgency: low
Maintainer: Debian Multimedia Maintainers
<[email protected]>
Changed-By: Alessio Treglia <[email protected]>
Description:
gmusicbrowser - graphical jukebox for large music collections
Closes: 727672
Changes:
gmusicbrowser (1.1.12+ds0-1) unstable; urgency=low
.
* Improve package's description.
Thanks to Justin B Rye for the patch. (Closes: #727672)
* debian/copyright: Various small improvements and updates.
* Repack upstream tarball to strip out locale/ and layout_doc.html.
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