On Sat, 19 May 2012 16:41:08 +0200 Raphael Hertzog wrote: [...] > On Fri, 18 May 2012, Francesco Poli (wintermute) wrote: > > I hope this may be useful to you, in order to make the chapter even > > better than it is currently! > > I included some of your fixes and reworded some of the sections that > you found unclear.
Great! I am happy to hear that. Thanks for reacting very quickly. > > > | Debian is truly an international project: Its developers can be found > > > > Typo? s/Its/its/ > > We can have a capital after ":" and ";". It's recommended by the Chicago > Manual of Style when you have more than one sentence after those symbols. Interesting, I didn't know that. Sorry for reporting non-existing typos, then! ;-) > > > | the manager thereof must continue to improve it > > > > Should it perhaps be s/manager/maintainer/ ? > > Yes. Good. Bye. -- http://www.inventati.org/frx/frx-gpg-key-transition-2010.txt New GnuPG key, see the transition document! ..................................................... Francesco Poli . GnuPG key fpr == CA01 1147 9CD2 EFDF FB82 3925 3E1C 27E1 1F69 BFFE
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