Christian PERRIER wrote: >>> _Description: Database host for naxsi: >>> - Please specify the hostname of the server where the naxsi Web Application >>> - Firewall's database should be located. >>> + Please specify the hostname of the server that will host the database >>> + for the naxsi web application firewall. >>> >>> Rephrase to avoid the possessive form that (imho) looks weird. >> >> As a matter of fact that does look like an improvement! [...]
> What about the templates file? Shall we go with the current version in > the package (that has been reviewed by us) or what I proposed > (reviewed by us, then by me..:-))? As far as I'm concerned, your version looks better - for a start it talks straightforwardly about the server hosting the database instead of going through an unnecessary spacial metaphor. -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org