Christian PERRIER wrote:
>>> _Description: Database host for naxsi:
>>> - Please specify the hostname of the server where the naxsi Web Application
>>> - Firewall's database should be located.
>>> + Please specify the hostname of the server that will host the database
>>> + for the naxsi web application firewall.
>>>
>>> Rephrase to avoid the possessive form that (imho) looks weird.
>>
>> As a matter of fact that does look like an improvement!
[...]
> What about the templates file? Shall we go with the current version in
> the package (that has been reviewed by us) or what I proposed
> (reviewed by us, then by me..:-))?
As far as I'm concerned, your version looks better - for a start it
talks straightforwardly about the server hosting the database instead
of going through an unnecessary spacial metaphor.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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