[Oops, this didn't go out when I thought it did. Re-sending:] Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: > Description: Pharmaceutical drugs prescriptor and interactions checker
Also: synopses don't need an initial capital letter, and no dictionaries I can find believe in the word "prescriptor" (though I suppose it might be jargon known only to the kind of specialists who'd want this package). > The FreeMedForms project is a set of free and open source > medical application used to help health professionals A set of applicationS, plural. > in their current practice. As opposed to their previous practice? Maybe this should say something like "day-to-day". > It is developed by a international community of medical s/ a inter/ an inter/ > doctors and computer workers. > . > FreeDiams is a pharmaceutical drug prescriptor assistant. No such word, again. > It can be used to creation complex prescription and to manage > drugs interactions. The verb is "to create", and you mean plural "prescriptions". > > For me a project is a group of persons working on a task. So it can't be > a collection of applications. Well, I'd probably say it makes sense to talk about a software project consisting of software... so I'd suggest using the ambiguous word "provides". > Debian is free - so free and open source are redundant. > > My proposal: > > Description: Pharmaceutical drugs prescriptor and interactions checker > The FreeMedForms project maintains a set of medical applications > used to help health professionals in their current practice. > It is developed by an international community of medical doctors > and computer specialists. > . > FreeDiams is a pharmaceutical drug prescriptor assistant. > It can be used to create complex prescriptions and to handle > drugs interactions. Or: Description: pharmaceutical prescription and interaction manager The FreeMedForms project provides a set of medical applications to help health professionals in their day-to-day practice. It is developed by an international community of medical doctors and computer specialists. . FreeDiams is a pharmaceutical drug prescription assistant which can be used to create complex prescriptions and to handle drug interactions. -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org