Package: debian-handbook Version: 6.0+20120509 Severity: minor Hello Raphaël, I've just finished reading chapter 13. I am hereby sending my list of proposed modifications and corrections, as usual.
Section 13.2.2. Choosing a Window Manager ----------------------------------------- | "Light" (or small footprint) window managers include WindowMaker | (in the wmaker package), Afterstep, fvwm, icewm or blackbox. I would suggest to also mention fluxbox and openbox... Section 13.3.1. GNOME --------------------- Typo? s/seeminly/seemingly/ Typo? s/webside/website/ Section 13.4.1.1. Evolution --------------------------- Typo? s/differenciating/differentiating/ Section 13.4.3.1. Tools for GTK+ on GNOME ----------------------------------------- Repetition? s/for for plugins/for plugins/ Section 13.4.4.2. Instant Messaging Systems ------------------------------------------- | KDE provides Kopete (in the openoffice.org package) Typo? s/openoffice.org/kopete/ Section 13.4.4.3. Collaborative Work With FusionForge ----------------------------------------------------- Typo? s/an history/a history/ N.B.: since the "h" in "history" is not silent, the correct article should be "a", rather than "an", as far as I know. In order to check that I recalled correctly, I took a look at http://www.learnenglish.de/grammar/articlestext.htm#AAn which seems to confirm. -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
