Package: debian-handbook Version: 6.0+20120509 Severity: minor Hello Raphaël, I've just finished reading chapters 15 and 16: I am here sending my usual list of corrections and improvements.
Section 15.2.1. Meta-Packages or Fake Packages ---------------------------------------------- Typo? s/the name and the maintainer/the name of the maintainer/ Typo? s/in a Debian packages/in Debian packages/ Section 15.2.2. Simple File Archive ----------------------------------- Typo? s/The Makefile files describes/The Makefile file describes/ Section 15.4.2. Acceptance Process [and following sections] ----------------------------------------------------------- The "new maintainer process" is now called the "new member process". I think that the sections that mention this process should be updated accordingly... Section 16.1. Upcoming Developments ----------------------------------- | a 3.x version of GNOME, which brings a deep and promising change | in the usual graphical desktop paradigm. Taking into account the huge amount of criticism that GNOME 3.x received, I would suggest a more cautious phrasing, that avoids positive (or negative) opinions on this change. The change is deep, no doubt about it, but I would avoid labelling it as "promising": s/deep and promising/deep/ -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
