Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the pam-mysql source package.
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Rationale:
--- pam-mysql.old/debian/libpam-mysql.templates 2012-08-22 06:51:38.940010532
+0200
+++ pam-mysql/debian/libpam-mysql.templates 2012-08-26 17:35:43.650241967
+0200
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
Template: pam-mysql/config_file_noread
Type: boolean
Default: true
-Description: Chmod configuration file?
- This version of pam-mysql has a configuration file which may include
- passwords. Do you want to disable normal users from reading this
- file?
+_Description: Restrict access to pam-mysql configuration file to root?
+ This version of pam-mysql uses a configuration file which may include
+ passwords. It is recommended to restrict access to this file
+ so that unprivileged users can't read it.
.
- There is probably no good reason *not* to do this. As the most common
- reason to use the configuration file is to hide the password.
+ If you choose this option, only root will have read access to pam-mysql
+ configuration file.
Make template translatable by prepending "_"
"chmod configuration file" is unclear and jargonic. Be clearer.
The package "uses" a configuration file. IMHO better than "has".
Avoid question in long description (see DevRef)
Use "it is recommended" instead of "no good reason *not* to do this"
which might be confusing.
Explain exactly what's happening.
--- pam-mysql.old/debian/control 2012-08-22 06:51:38.940010532 +0200
+++ pam-mysql/debian/control 2012-08-26 17:40:24.714171053 +0200
@@ -11,5 +11,5 @@
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: PAM module allowing authentication from a MySQL server
This module lets you use a MySQL database as a source of
- authentication (but not session or other) information for PAM-enabled
- apps.
+ authentication information for PAM-enabled
+ applications. It doesn't allow session authentication, though.
Small changes but this can be improved again, I guess.
--
Template: pam-mysql/config_file_noread Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Restrict access to pam-mysql configuration file to root? This version of pam-mysql uses a configuration file which may include passwords. It is recommended to restrict access to this file so that unprivileged users can't read it. . If you choose this option, only root will have read access to pam-mysql configuration file.
--- pam-mysql.old/debian/libpam-mysql.templates 2012-08-22 06:51:38.940010532
+0200
+++ pam-mysql/debian/libpam-mysql.templates 2012-08-26 17:35:43.650241967
+0200
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
Template: pam-mysql/config_file_noread
Type: boolean
Default: true
-Description: Chmod configuration file?
- This version of pam-mysql has a configuration file which may include
- passwords. Do you want to disable normal users from reading this
- file?
+_Description: Restrict access to pam-mysql configuration file to root?
+ This version of pam-mysql uses a configuration file which may include
+ passwords. It is recommended to restrict access to this file
+ so that unprivileged users can't read it.
.
- There is probably no good reason *not* to do this. As the most common
- reason to use the configuration file is to hide the password.
+ If you choose this option, only root will have read access to pam-mysql
+ configuration file.
--- pam-mysql.old/debian/control 2012-08-22 06:51:38.940010532 +0200
+++ pam-mysql/debian/control 2012-08-26 17:40:24.714171053 +0200
@@ -11,5 +11,5 @@
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Description: PAM module allowing authentication from a MySQL server
This module lets you use a MySQL database as a source of
- authentication (but not session or other) information for PAM-enabled
- apps.
+ authentication information for PAM-enabled
+ applications. It doesn't allow session authentication, though.
Source: pam-mysql Section: admin Priority: extra Maintainer: Paweł Więcek <[email protected]> Uploaders: Lars Bahner <[email protected]> Standards-Version: 3.8.0 Build-Depends: libpam0g-dev, libmysqlclient15-dev, debhelper (>= 5.0.0), libssl-dev, dpatch Package: libpam-mysql Architecture: any Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends} Description: PAM module allowing authentication from a MySQL server This module lets you use a MySQL database as a source of authentication information for PAM-enabled applications. It doesn't allow session authentication, though.
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