On Thu, 20 Oct 2005, Filippo Giunchedi wrote: > please check out the new description: > http://svn.debian.org/wsvn/utnubu/packages/dmraid/trunk/debian/?rev=0&sc=0
I'd change some stuff: "The following chipsets are recognized:" is wrong. Chipsets have nothing to do with it, and the list is not a list of chipsets either. I much prefer "The following formats are supported:" Also, the highpoint entries can be merged, and probably DOS partitions are recognized ONLY inside the mappings done by dm-raid, so "on SW RAIDS" would be better written "inside the above"... BUT you already said that in the first paragraph of the extended description, so deleting that item from the list is better. -- "One disk to rule them all, One disk to find them. One disk to bring them all and in the darkness grind them. In the Land of Redmond where the shadows lie." -- The Silicon Valley Tarot Henrique Holschuh -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
