Thanks, David Prevot. That looks good to me. Now, if only we could get the world to read it...
On Fri, Jul 5, 2013 at 9:04 PM, David Prévot <taf...@debian.org> wrote: > Hi Robert, > > Thanks for your interest in improving the Debian website. > > Le 16/04/2013 23:13, Robert Pogson a écrit : > > [ The packages number issue has been fixed independently. ] > > > To the extent that more people using Debian GNU/Linux will make the world > > a better place, I suggest these features not be "undersold". I propose > > this wording for that paragraph, > > Please, find it attached in diff format (after slight editing), with the > full updated source page. The resulted page can be seen on my test > server too: > > http://www.tilapin.org/debian/intro/about.en#what > > Let me add the Debian L10n English team into the loop (that allows me to > thank Justin for his tireless work, very welcome by the current DPN > editors by the way), and ask if the proposed change is OK. Since there > is more than one package manager, I’m not sure it’s the role of this > page to focus only on this one (as done for good reason in other places > like the release notes). > > Regards > > David > > -- Robert Pogson Have server, will travel...
