Hello Osamu,
On Sat, Jul 12, 2014 at 10:58:25PM +0900, Osamu Aoki wrote:
> > I'm almost finished. Should I include those corrections you marked "OK
> > (Style)" as well?
> 
> Please

Attached you'll find the two patch files. I suggest that either you or me
send the respective part for each language also to the previous
translator for a final review (I cannot actually speak all languages I
worked on, thus some minor adjustmensts might still be sensible)

I tried'ed to faithfully follow the mandate given by you[1]. Thus the
following are not included:

   * Factual addition/correction which require translation

-"Since this is a tutorial, I choose to explain each detailed step for some "
+"Since this is a tutorial, I choose to explain each step in detail for some "

 "upstream source in a format other than <filename>tar.gz</filename> or "
-"<filename>tar.bz2</filename>"
+"<filename>tar.bz2</filename> or <filename>tar.xz</filename>"


      * Stylistic change which does not cause translation change.
-"literal> into <literal>foo2</literal>:<placeholder type=\"footnote\" id="
+"literal> into <literal>foo2</literal>: <placeholder type=\"footnote\" id="

-"Line 6 is the version of the <ulink url=\"&debian-policy;\">Debian Policy "
-"Manual</ulink> standards this package follows, the one you read while making "
-"Line 6 is the version of the <ulink url=\"&debian-policy;\">Debian Policy"
+"</ulink> standards this package follows, the one you read while making "

-"Policy Manual, \"D.2.5 Conffiles\"</ulink>."
+"Policy Manual, D.2.5 \"Conffiles\"</ulink>."

-"der Option <literal>--pristine-tar</literal> erstellt wurden.<placeholder "
+"der Option <literal>--pristine-tar</literal> erstellt wurden. <placeholder "

-"<literal>experimental</literal>).<placeholder type=\"footnote\" id=\"0\"/>"
+"<literal>experimental</literal>). <placeholder type=\"footnote\" id=\"0\"/>"

Greetings

           Helge

[1] I corrected one more obvious spelling mistake thit → it

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