Package: debian-reference-en
Version: 2.55
Severity: minor
Tags: l10n

Section 1 contains:
The Debian system itself is a moving target. This makes its documentation 
difficult to be current and correct. Although the current unstable version of 
the Debian system was used as the basis for writing this, some contents may be 
already outdated by the time you read this.

"to be" should read something like "to keep".


By the way, the version of the Debian system used as basis is not the current 
unstable version [anymore], and I'm not sure this paragraph is warranted. 
Pretty much all healthy software changes. Debian's documentation is no harder 
to keep updated than documentation for an equally complex project, disregarding 
language issues. I suggest shortening this to at most 2 sentences.

--
Filipus Klutiero
http://www.philippecloutier.com


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