Christian Seiler wrote:
>>  Description: iSCSI management tools
> 
> Actually, if we are changing the description of the package as well,
> I'd rather be more specific:
> 
>  Description: iSCSI initiator tools
> 
> Because there are also iSCSI targets packaged in Debian (iscsitarget,
> targetcli), and management seems to be too generic of a word.

This is reaching the point where I'm glad of the caveat in my sig, but
here's an updated patch.
-- 
JBR     with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
        sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
diff -ru open-iscsi-2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500.pristine/debian/control 
open-iscsi-2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500/debian/control
--- open-iscsi-2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500.pristine/debian/control    2015-08-29 
09:14:14.000000000 +0100
+++ open-iscsi-2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500/debian/control     2015-09-11 
17:08:20.506135626 +0100
@@ -13,21 +13,23 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, udev
 Pre-Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0
-Description: High performance, transport independent iSCSI implementation
+Description: iSCSI initiator tools
  Open-iSCSI is a high-performance, transport independent, multi-platform
- implementation of RFC3720 iSCSI
+ implementation of the RFC3720 Internet Small Computer Systems Interface
+ (iSCSI).
  .
- Open-iSCSI is partitioned into user and kernel parts where the kernel
- portion implements iSCSI data path (i.e. iSCSI Read and iSCSI Write)
- The userspace contains the entire control plane consisting of:
-  * Configuration Manager
-  * iSCSI Discovery, Login and Logout processing
-  * Connection level error processing
-  * Nop-In and Nop-Out handling
-  * Text processing, iSNS, SLP, Radius et cetera (future)
+ Open-iSCSI is partitioned into user and kernel parts, where the kernel
+ portion implements the iSCSI data path (i.e. iSCSI Read and iSCSI Write).
+ The userspace contains the entire control plane:
+  * Configuration Manager;
+  * iSCSI Discovery;
+  * Login and Logout processing;
+  * Connection level error processing;
+  * Nop-In and Nop-Out handling;
+  * (in the future) Text processing, iSNS, SLP, Radius, etc.
  .
- The userspace component consists of a daemon, iscsid and a management
- utility, iscsiadm
+ This package includes a daemon, iscsid, and a management utility,
+ iscsiadm.
 
 Package: open-iscsi-udeb
 # Note: the (virtual) udeb package scsi-modules (provided by different
@@ -40,7 +42,8 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, scsi-modules, libnss-files-udeb
 Description: Configure iSCSI
  Open-iSCSI is a high-performance, transport independent, multi-platform
- implementation of RFC3720 iSCSI.
+ implementation of the RFC3720 Internet Small Computer Systems Interface
+ (iSCSI).
  .
  This is the minimal package (udeb) used by debian-installer.
 
@@ -50,4 +53,3 @@
 #Description: Source Code for the Linux iSCSI Kernel Modules
 # Along with make-kpkg, this package maybe used to build a linux-iscsi-modules 
 # package for a kernel-image package.
-
diff -ru open-iscsi-2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500.pristine/debian/open-iscsi.templates 
open-iscsi-2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500/debian/open-iscsi.templates
--- open-iscsi-2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500.pristine/debian/open-iscsi.templates       
2015-08-29 09:14:14.000000000 +0100
+++ open-iscsi-2.0.873+git0.3b4b4500/debian/open-iscsi.templates        
2015-09-11 12:33:52.281669203 +0100
@@ -1,31 +1,35 @@
 Template: open-iscsi/remove_even_with_active_sessions
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Do you want to proceed with removing open-iscsi?
+#flag:translate!:6,8
+_Description: Proceed with removing open-iscsi?
  There are currently active iSCSI sessions. If you remove open-iscsi
- now this may lead to data loss and/or hang your system at shutdown.
+ now this may lead to data loss and/or hang the system at shutdown.
  .
- DO NOT DO THIS IF YOUR ROOT FILESYSTEM IS ON ISCSI!
+ Do not do this if this system's root filesystem is on iSCSI.
  .
  If you do proceed, open-iscsi will try to unmount all filesystems on
- iSCSI and logout from current sessions. If that fails (because a
- filesystem is still in use), the kernel will keep open the current
- iSCSI sessions, but not perform any recovery in case there is an
- interruption of the network connection (or the target is rebooted
- etc.).
+ iSCSI and log out from current sessions. If that fails (because a
+ filesystem is still in use), the kernel will keep the current
+ iSCSI sessions open, but will not perform any recovery if there is an
+ interruption of the network connection (or if the target is rebooted).
+ .
+ If you really intend to remove open-iscsi, you should abort here and
+ then stop open-iscsi:
  .
- If you really want to remove open-iscsi, it is advisable to abort here
- and to first stop open-iscsi:
    service open-iscsi stop
+ .
  If that did not clean up everything, manually umount all filesystems
- that are on iSCSI, manually dismantle the storage stack and only then
- logout from all iSCSI sessions:
+ that are on iSCSI, manually dismantle the storage stack, and only then
+ log out from all iSCSI sessions:
+ .
    iscsiadm -m node --logoutall=all
+ .
  At that point, it should be safe to remove this package.
 
 Template: open-iscsi/upgrade_even_with_failed_sessions
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Do you want to proceed with upgrading open-iscsi?
- There are currently failed iSCSI sessions. Upgrading open-iscsi MAY
+_Description: Proceed with upgrading open-iscsi?
+ There are currently failed iSCSI sessions. Upgrading open-iscsi may
  cause data loss.
  .
  If you do not proceed, the preinstallation script will be aborted and
@@ -37,22 +41,22 @@
  recovery will be attempted once more.
 
 Template: open-iscsi/upgrade_recovery_error
-Type: note
+Type: error
 _Description: iSCSI recovery error on upgrade
- iscsid was restarted, but couldn't recover all iSCSI sessions. This is
- bad and could lead to DATA LOSS. Please check your system and kernel
+ The iscsid daemon was restarted, but couldn't recover all iSCSI sessions.
+ This is bad and could lead to data loss. Please check the system and kernel
  logs to determine the cause of the issue.
  .
- Please DO NOT acknowledge this note until you have fixed the problem
+ Please do not acknowledge this note until you have fixed the problem
  from a separate login shell.
 
 Template: open-iscsi/downgrade_and_break_system
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Do you really want to downgrade open-iscsi?
+_Description: Proceed with downgrading open-iscsi?
  You are trying to downgrade open-iscsi. Because of changes between the
  version you are downgrading to and the version currently installed,
- this downgrade WILL BREAK YOUR SYSTEM.
+ this downgrade will break the system.
  .
- If you really want to downgrade, please follow the following procedure
+ If you really intend to downgrade, please follow the following procedure
  instead: umount all iSCSI file systems, log out of all iSCSI sessions,
- back up /etc/iscsi, purge open-iscsi and reinstall the older version.
+ back up /etc/iscsi, purge open-iscsi, and reinstall the older version.
Template: open-iscsi/remove_even_with_active_sessions
Type: boolean
#flag:translate!:6,8
_Description: Proceed with removing open-iscsi?
 There are currently active iSCSI sessions. If you remove open-iscsi
 now this may lead to data loss and/or hang the system at shutdown.
 .
 Do not do this if this system's root filesystem is on iSCSI.
 .
 If you do proceed, open-iscsi will try to unmount all filesystems on
 iSCSI and log out from current sessions. If that fails (because a
 filesystem is still in use), the kernel will keep the current
 iSCSI sessions open, but will not perform any recovery if there is an
 interruption of the network connection (or if the target is rebooted).
 .
 If you really intend to remove open-iscsi, you should abort here and
 then stop open-iscsi:
 .
   service open-iscsi stop
 .
 If that did not clean up everything, manually umount all filesystems
 that are on iSCSI, manually dismantle the storage stack, and only then
 log out from all iSCSI sessions:
 .
   iscsiadm -m node --logoutall=all
 .
 At that point, it should be safe to remove this package.

Template: open-iscsi/upgrade_even_with_failed_sessions
Type: boolean
_Description: Proceed with upgrading open-iscsi?
 There are currently failed iSCSI sessions. Upgrading open-iscsi may
 cause data loss.
 .
 If you do not proceed, the preinstallation script will be aborted and
 you will have the option to manually recover the iSCSI sessions. (Note
 that aborting an upgrade is problematic if you are dist-upgrading your
 entire system.) You may also recover the iSCSI sessions manually while
 keeping this prompt open and then choose to proceed. Or you may choose
 to proceed directly, after which iscsid will be restarted and session
 recovery will be attempted once more.

Template: open-iscsi/upgrade_recovery_error
Type: error
_Description: iSCSI recovery error on upgrade
 The iscsid daemon was restarted, but couldn't recover all iSCSI sessions.
 This is bad and could lead to data loss. Please check the system and kernel
 logs to determine the cause of the issue.
 .
 Please do not acknowledge this note until you have fixed the problem
 from a separate login shell.

Template: open-iscsi/downgrade_and_break_system
Type: boolean
_Description: Proceed with downgrading open-iscsi?
 You are trying to downgrade open-iscsi. Because of changes between the
 version you are downgrading to and the version currently installed,
 this downgrade will break the system.
 .
 If you really intend to downgrade, please follow the following procedure
 instead: umount all iSCSI file systems, log out of all iSCSI sessions,
 back up /etc/iscsi, purge open-iscsi, and reinstall the older version.
Source: open-iscsi
Section: net
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Debian iSCSI Maintainers 
<pkg-iscsi-maintain...@lists.alioth.debian.org>
Uploaders: Ritesh Raj Sarraf <r...@debian.org>, Christian Seiler 
<christ...@iwakd.de>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 9), bzip2, bison, flex, autotools-dev, 
dh-autoreconf, dh-exec, dpkg-dev (>= 1.16.1~), po-debconf, dh-systemd
Standards-Version: 3.9.6
Vcs-Git: git://anonscm.debian.org/pkg-iscsi/open-iscsi.git
Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=pkg-iscsi/open-iscsi.git
Homepage: http://www.open-iscsi.org/

Package: open-iscsi
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, udev
Pre-Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0
Description: iSCSI initiator tools
 Open-iSCSI is a high-performance, transport independent, multi-platform
 implementation of the RFC3720 Internet Small Computer Systems Interface
 (iSCSI).
 .
 Open-iSCSI is partitioned into user and kernel parts, where the kernel
 portion implements the iSCSI data path (i.e. iSCSI Read and iSCSI Write).
 The userspace contains the entire control plane:
  * Configuration Manager;
  * iSCSI Discovery;
  * Login and Logout processing;
  * Connection level error processing;
  * Nop-In and Nop-Out handling;
  * (in the future) Text processing, iSNS, SLP, Radius, etc.
 .
 This package includes a daemon, iscsid, and a management utility,
 iscsiadm.

Package: open-iscsi-udeb
# Note: the (virtual) udeb package scsi-modules (provided by different
#       linux kernel udebs) must exist for these architectures - so
#       check that before adding them to this list; the other
#       scsi-(core|common|...)-modules are NOT sufficient!
Architecture: amd64 arm64 i386 ia64 mips mipsel powerpc s390x ppc64el ppc64 
armhf
Section: debian-installer
Package-Type: udeb
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, scsi-modules, libnss-files-udeb
Description: Configure iSCSI
 Open-iSCSI is a high-performance, transport independent, multi-platform
 implementation of the RFC3720 Internet Small Computer Systems Interface
 (iSCSI).
 .
 This is the minimal package (udeb) used by debian-installer.

#Package: linux-iscsi-modules-source
#Architecture: all
#Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, module-assistant, debhelper (>= 
4.0.0), bzip2
#Description: Source Code for the Linux iSCSI Kernel Modules
# Along with make-kpkg, this package maybe used to build a linux-iscsi-modules 
# package for a kernel-image package.

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