On Tue, Sep 29, Christian PERRIER wrote: (Sorry about that delay, I had an 11-day broadband outage!)
> That's a full rewrite, as original templates were....very short..:-) > > Justin, I have my usual doubts about "login to"...:-) Yes, it's not wrong enough that it'll trip people up, but it's a separable verb: "log in to". (The third option I occasionally see people use is "log into", but I prefer the three-word version.) > Template: dyfi/username > Type: string > _Description: Username on dy.fi: > Please provide the user name that should be used to login to dy.fi ^ ^ > services and update dynamic hostname mappings. Also, it's a username (like "ajm") rather than a user('s) name. > Template: dyfi/password > Type: password > _Description: Password on dy.fi: > Please provide the password that should be used to login to dy.fi ^ > services and update dynamic hostname mappings. > > Template: dyfi/hosts > Type: string > _Description: Registered hostnames on dy.fi: > Please provide a space-separated list of hostnames that should be > dynamically updated by dy.fi services. No problems here. In the control file: > Package: dyfi [...] > Description: Client for updating dynamic hostname mappings for dy.fi ^ Should be lowercase. > This is a client software (which runs as daemon) for automatically updating > dynamic hostname mappings at dy.fi - free dynamic DNS service offered > exclusively for Finnish users. There's no such thing as a software (and besides, if it comes in a Debian package, we already know it's software!), so just say "this is a client". Two missing articles: "as a daemon", "a free dynamic DNS service". > . > This client software lets you configure your credentials and hostname(s) > upon install. These credentials and hostname(s) must be registered at dy.fi > website beforehand. The same "software" problem and some unnecessary repetition: On install, this client lets you configure your credentials and hostname(s), which must be registered at the dy.fi website beforehand. -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package