Just nitpicking the phrasing and adding markup.
Christian Seiler wrote:
> iSCSI Enterprise Target (IET) no longer part of Stretch
>
> The iSCSI Enterprise Target (IET), packaged in the 'iscsitarget'
> package in previous Debbian versions, is not part of Debian
> Stretch anymore, as it will not work with recent kernel versions,
> and the project has seen no development activity in recent years.
Typo: s/Debbian/Debian/.
"No longer part of Stretch" and "is not part of Debian Stretch
anymore" give the impression that the package has been removed from
the stable release rather than falling out of Debian testing/unstable
before the freeze.
(Also, the standard this document follows is lowercase release names).
> Users of IET are encouraged to switch to the LIO stack that is
> fully supported in Debian Stretch. The 'targetcli-fb' provides
> the configuration utility for the LIO iSCSI target.
Missing word: "the package 'targetcli-fb'".
> As the LIO stack was developed independently of the IET, the
> configuration has to be migrated manually.
No problems here. So:
<section id="iscsitarget">
<title>iSCSI Enterprise Target no longer supported</title>
<!-- jessie to stretch -->
<para>
The iSCSI Enterprise Target (IET), packaged in the <systemitem
role="package">iscsitarget</systemitem> package in previous releases,
is no longer in Debian, as it will not work with recent kernel
versions, and the project has seen no development activity in recent
years.
</para>
<para>
Users of IET are encouraged to switch to the LIO stack, which is
fully supported in Debian stretch. The package <systemitem
role="package">targetcli-fb</systemitem> provides the configuration
utility for the LIO iSCSI target.
</para>
<para>
As the LIO stack was developed independently of the IET, the
configuration has to be migrated manually.
</para>
</section>
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
