On Sun, Oct 29, 2017 at 03:52:58PM +0000, Jonathan McDowell wrote:
> adds a footnote with the
> SSH command required to query MIA (which I think is generally DD
> accessible?).

Yes, qa.debian.org is accessible to all DDs and whoever is in the 'qa'
team (very rare, but I was in the qa team before being DD and I had
access to it.

Your proposed text looks very fine to me, seconded.
Just a little editorial point:

>   This is a last attempt to make contact with {{person.fullname}} (CC'd),

No uid here?

>   or find out if anyone in the project is able to provide us with further
>   details about their whereabouts. If you think you can help please let us
>   know by replying to this email or, for a more confidential channel,
>   replace debian-private with w...@debian.org.

At this point I suggest also adding

    {{text|safe}}

    The process is tracked at [1].

>   The Missing In Action team has been trying to reach out to this
>   developer for some time; more details can be seen via mia-query[0].
>   Unfortunately this was not successful and a final attempt was made via
>   the nm.debian.org system[1] on {{process.started|date:"F d, Y"}}.

And then here move mia-query to [2] and remove the [1].


That's because I believe a pointer to the nm.d.o process should be made
clearer instead of hidden in 4-line paragraph.

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