Package: libnotify-bin
Version: 0.3.2-2
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Hi,

I was looking at the man-page of notify-send and I found some points of
improvement:

- There is no short description (useful for `whatis').
- The options are listed twice.
- The options were listed in the Description section instead
  of the Options section.
- The Description section didn't contain any description.
- The See Also section was referring to info files, but there
  are none (AFAIK).
- The See Also section could refer to the spec mentioned in
  the deb description of libnotify-bin.
- The Author section was missing.

I have attached a patch solving almost all these problems except that I do
not know who wrote/made the original man-page so I couldn't include that in
the Author section body.

Regards,

Paul


-- System Information:
Debian Release: testing/unstable
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (102, 'experimental')
Architecture: powerpc (ppc)
Shell:  /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
Kernel: Linux 2.6.15-1-powerpc
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=nl_NL.UTF8 (charmap=UTF-8)

Versions of packages libnotify-bin depends on:
ii  libc6                         2.3.6-1    GNU C Library: Shared libraries an
ii  libglib2.0-0                  2.8.6-1    The GLib library of C routines
ii  libnotify1                    0.3.2-2    sends desktop notifications to a n
ii  libpopt0                      1.7-5      lib for parsing cmdline parameters
ii  libxcursor1                   1.1.3-1    X cursor management library

libnotify-bin recommends no packages.

-- no debconf information
--- debian/notify-send.1.old    2006-02-20 08:41:45.000000000 +0000
+++ debian/notify-send.1        2006-02-20 08:58:17.000000000 +0000
@@ -1,34 +1,15 @@
-.\" DO NOT MODIFY THIS FILE!  It was generated by help2man 1.36.
 .TH USAGE: "1" "November 2005" "notify-send 0.2.2" "User Commands"
 .SH NAME
-notify-send
+notify-send - a program to send desktop notifications
 .SH SYNOPSIS
 .B notify-send
-[\fIOPTIONS\fR]\fI* <summary> \fR[\fIbody\fR]
+[\fIOPTIONS\fR]\fI <summary> \fR[\fIbody\fR]
 .SH DESCRIPTION
-.TP
-\fB\-u\fR, \fB\-\-urgency\fR=\fISTRING\fR
-Specifies the urgency level (low, normal,
-critical).
-.TP
-\fB\-t\fR, \fB\-\-expire\-time\fR=\fIINT\fR
-Specifies the timeout in seconds at which to
-expire the notification.
-.TP
-\fB\-i\fR, \fB\-\-icon\fR=\fIICON1\fR,ICON2,...
-Specifies an icon filename or stock icon to
-display.
-.TP
-\fB\-t\fR, \fB\-\-type\fR=\fIICON1\fR,ICON2,...
-Specifies the notification type.
-.SS "Help options:"
-.TP
-\-?, \fB\-\-help\fR
-Show this help message
-.TP
-\fB\-\-usage\fR
-Display brief usage message
-.TP
+With \fInotify-send\fR you can sends desktop notifications to the user via
+a notification daemon from the command line.  These notifications can be
+used to inform the user about an event or display some form of information
+without getting in the user's way.
+.SH OPTIONS
 \fB\-u\fR, \fB\-\-urgency\fR=\fISTRING\fR
 Specifies the urgency level (low, normal,
 critical).
@@ -50,15 +31,8 @@
 .TP
 \fB\-\-usage\fR
 Display brief usage message
-.SH "SEE ALSO"
-The full documentation for
-.B Usage:
-is maintained as a Texinfo manual.  If the
-.B info
-and
-.B Usage:
-programs are properly installed at your site, the command
-.IP
-.B info Usage:
-.PP
-should give you access to the complete manual.
+.SH SEE ALSO
+The Desktop Notification Spec on 
http://www.galago-project.org/specs/notification/.
+.SH AUTHOR
+This manual page was written by ???? <????>
+for the Debian project (but may be used by others).

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