On Sat, Mar 10, 2018 at 11:01:10PM +0000, Rebecca N. Palmer wrote:
> and 'Policy...them'
> is grammatically incorrect (it should probably be 'Policies').

mhh, this is not as straightforward as you may make it sound.

the DMUP is one policy (you have read it, right??), and I *think* the
'them' refers only to the DMUP, not to the SC and DFSG which are in a
different sentence.
But I'm not sure of the original intention, so I'll wait before fixing
this, to hear what were the original intentions.

> The latter would presumably need to be fixed in both the suggested text and
> the checker.

% git grep 'have read the Debian Machine Usage'|wc -l
8

wow, that's a lot…

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